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I am based in Perth, Western Australia. You might enjoy my books - The Dagger of Dresnia, the first book of the Talismans Trilogy, is available at all good online book shops as is Book two, The Cloak of Challiver. Book three, The Seer of Syland, is in preparation. I trained in piano and singing at the NSW Conservatorium of Music. I also trained in dance (Scully-Borovansky, WAAPA) and drama (NIDA). Since 1987 I have been writing reviews of performances in all genres for a variety of publications, including Music Maker, ArtsWest, Dance Australia, The Australian and others. Now semi-retired, I still write occasionally for the ArtsHub website.

My books

The first two books of my trilogy, The Talismans, (The Dagger of Dresnia, and book two, The Cloak of Challiver) are available in e-book format from Smashwords, Amazon and other online sellers. Book three of the trilogy, The Seer of Syland, is in preparation.I also have a short story, 'La Belle Dame', in print - see Mythic Resonance below - as well as well as a few poems in various places. The best way to contact me is via Facebook at https://www.facebook.com/satimaflavell

Buy The Talismans

The first two books of The Talismans trilogy were published by Satalyte Publications, which, sadly, has gone out of business. However, The Dagger of Dresnia and The Cloak of Challiver are available as ebooks on the usual book-selling websites, and book three, The Seer of Syland, is in preparation. The easiest way to contact me is via Facebook.

The Dagger of Dresnia

The Dagger of Dresnia

The Cloak of Challiver, Book two of The Talismans

The Cloak of Challiver, Book two of The Talismans
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Mythic Resonance

Mythic Resonance

Mythic Resonance is an excellent anthology that includes my short story 'La Belle Dame', together with great stories from Alan Baxter, Donna Maree Hanson, Sue Burstynski, Nike Sulway and nine more fantastic authors! Just $US3.99 from Amazon. Got a Kindle? Check out Mythic Resonance.

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Wednesday, 20 March 2013

Write a decent synopsis




When an agent or an editor at a publishing house asks for a sample of your work, s/he will usually want to see a synopsis as well. Even if you’re self-publishing and have done the right thing by engaging a freelance editor to help prepare your manuscript, you will usually find that she’ll want a synopsis. In fact, when I do a mini-assessment for you, it’s one of the things I’ll ask for, too.

Why? Because from a decent synopsis, an agent or editor can see whether your story will 'work'. Does it have interesting characters doing interesting things? Is there an underlying conflict that holds the plot together? Can the climaxes be made to occur in the right places? Is it original? Does it remind the reader of another book? (This can be either a good thing or a bad thing – a good thing if your book has an original take on an idea that has sold well before: a bad thing if you’ve obviously written still another re-hash of Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter or Twilight.)

The first time you sit down to write a synopsis, you’ll probably tear your hair out when you realise that it’s going to take a lot more than the standard one or two pages to fit the whole story in. (It’s usually fine, BTW, to present your synopsis with single spacing – but be sure to note the requirements, if any, expressed by the person who will receive it.)

The very idea of compressing a 120k story into 700ww or even less throws many people into a tizzy as the task looks impossible! But relax! There’s trick to it – and that trick is that you don’t need to tell the whole story.

The Four Essentials
Any story can be summed up by looking at four things:
1.    Who is the main character?
2.    What does s/he want?
3.    What's stopping him/her from getting it?
4.    How does the MC set about defeating this opposition?

As an example, let’s take a look at Pride and Prejudice. (I’ve chosen this rather than a spec-fic novel because almost everyone has read it, seen the movie, seen the TV series — or all three!)

1.    Elizabeth Bennet, the second of five daughters in a family whose estate is entailed to the nearest male heir, is a self-sufficient young woman who disapproves of her mother’s determination to marry the girls off advantageously.
2.    Elizabeth wants to marry for love.
3.    There is a dearth of even halfway-loveable men in her social circle, yet when two new eligible bachelors arrive in the area, she soon becomes prejudiced against Mr Darcy, a proud man of good family who looks down on those who don’t meet his high expectations.
4.    Elizabeth must conquer her prejudice and convince Mr Darcy that he needs to overcome his pride before they can find happiness together.

Ok, that’s the bare bones of the story. Now, to put flesh on those bones we need to add:
1.    Other important characters, their goals and motivations
2.    Important events in the story
3.    The eventual outcome, at least in general terms.

What you need to do first is to meld those four things into what’s often called an 'elevator pitch' – a short resumĂ© that you could use to interest someone in your story in a very short space of time. It’s really just like a back cover blurb.

So, a blurb for Pride and Prejudice:
Elizabeth Bennet longs to marry for love, but for financial reasons it has to be to a wealthy man, and finding one who is both rich and loveable isn’t easy. When she meets the proud Mr Darcy, she quickly becomes prejudiced against his snobbery and his critical manner. Yet Mr Darcy is not all bad – and he is the one who can save the reputation of Elizabeth’s admittedly embarrassing, socially inept family. But can he overcome his pride, and she her prejudice, so they can learn to love each other?

Once you’ve done this, you have a handy tool for promoting your book – at the start of a query letter, for example.

Now let’s add more flesh to make our blurb into a real synopsis:
Elizabeth Bennet is the second of five daughters. Their family’s estate is entailed to the nearest male heir, the sisters’ obnoxious cousin, Mr Collins. Elizabeth wants to marry for love, and resents her mother’s determination to marry the girls off advantageously – but at least one of them must marry well to ensure the welfare of all five, once their parents have died and the estate has passed to Mr Collins.

The five sisters are quite un-alike, varying in character from sweet (Jane, the eldest) to sinful (Kitty and Lydia, the two youngest, whose main interests revolve around shopping – and flirting with army officers from a nearby garrison.)

When a wealthy bachelor, Mr Bingley, rents a nearby estate, Mrs Bennet’s hopes of pairing off her daughters rise. Mr Bingley, with his two condescending sisters and a well-born friend, Mr Darcy, attends a ball at the local assembly rooms, and it is apparent that Jane and Mr Bingley are attracted to each other. But Elizabeth overhears Mr Darcy criticising the company in general and her in particular, and she immediately writes him off as proud and snobbish.

One of the army officers, Mr Wickham, befriends Elizabeth. He tells her that he has been cheated out of his true vocation — the church — by Darcy’s mean behaviour, and Elizabeth, already prejudiced against Darcy, believes him.

Mr Collins proposes to Elizabeth. She dislikes his obsequious yet conceited manner and turns him down, much to her mother’s ire. The angry Mr Collins then proposes to Elizabeth’s best friend, Charlotte. Being just as poor as Elizabeth but more practical, Charlotte marries Collins at once.

On a visit to the newly-weds, Elizabeth runs into Mr Darcy and his cousin Colonel Fitzwilliam, who tells her that Darcy has separated Bingley from Jane. Then, unprepared, Elizabeth receives a declaration of love from Darcy. She confronts him about his ruin of the budding relationship between Jane and Bingley and Wickham's account of Darcy's mistreatment of him. Darcy leaves, too shocked to reply, but he sends Elizabeth a letter telling of his estrangement from Wickham, who had tried to seduce Darcy’s young sister, Georgiana. Darcy also confesses his repugnance for the behaviour of certain members of Elizabeth’s family, which is why he persuaded Bingley to stop courting Jane. In this Elizabeth has to admit he is right — her mother and younger sisters often exhibit quite unseemly behaviour. Her opinion of Darcy softens.

Elizabeth, with her aunt and uncle, visits Darcy's estate. He unexpectedly returns home. To Elizabeth’s astonishment, once they have both overcome their embarrassment, he makes an obvious effort to be friendly.

The cautious new start to their relationship is interrupted by news that Lydia has run away with Wickham, apparently with no intention of marriage. This will reflect badly on the entire family, and Elizabeth is convinced that any chance of a relationship between her and Darcy is in ruins.
However, news comes that Lydia and Wickham are married. Elizabeth learns that this was almost entirely due to Mr Darcy’s intervention – he paid Wickham to marry Lydia. Bingley returns and proposes to Jane – and Darcy once again proposes to Elizabeth!

Et VoilĂ !
That’s just over 500 words – one single spaced A4 page. The bare bones of the story are there — enough to give agents and publishers an idea of whether or not you have a workable storyline, and whether or not it’s the kind of thing they are looking for. You don't need to mention all the characters and you can leave sub-plots out altogether unless they impinge on the main plot in a big way. You will notice that I haven't mentioned Eliza's father or Lady de Vere at all, and the story still hangs together.
If you start with those four basic elements - the main character, what s/he wants, what’s stopping him/her from getting it and how s/he sets about defeating the opposition – and build up from there, you’ll come up with a decent synopsis every time.

This article first appeared in the now-defunct webzine, The Specusphere, on 10 September 2011.

(Picture courtesy Wikimedia Commons: © 2007 Nuno Pinheiro & David Vignoni & David Miller & Johann Ollivier Lapeyre & Kenneth Wimer & Riccardo Iaconelli / KDE / LGPL 3)
Sunday, 10 March 2013

Busy, busy, busy


I've been incredibly busy this last couple of months. I was engaged in a lot of reviewing for The Perth Festival, the Fringe Festival and the Writers Festival, and I also managed to fit in a weekend belly dance intensive!

The busy-ness is not over yet - I have two more shows to review in the next ten days. (You can read my reviews, BTW, over at Artshub.) Then of course, comes Swancon, the annual Perth SF convention. It is always held over the Easter weekend and attracts a lot of fans from interstate as well as local ones. I am particularly excited this time, because my short story 'La Belle Dame' has been shortlisted for the Best WA Professional Short Written Work section of the Tin Duck Awards. (OK, have a giggle - but the Tin Ducks are WA's state awards for SF and to be shortlisted is considered quite an achievement.) I'm pleased to see several of my friends and writing colleagues shortlisted, too, in various categories. Juliet Marillier has two books shortlisted in the Best WA Professional Long Written Work section, along with Joanna Fay, Adrian Bedford and Dane Richter. Joanna also has a short story up against mine, as does fellow Egoboo member Sarah Lee Parker. There are two other excellent contenders in this section - Martin Livings and Stephanie Gunn. It could be a close call -  may the best story win!

You can read 'La Belle Dame' in Mythic Resonance, now available as an e-book on Amazon for only $3.99. The print run is just about sold out, but I still have a few copies for sale. Leave a comment below or find me on Facebook if you're interested. Mythic Resonance contains 13 top-class stories, mostly derived from myths, legends or folk / fairy-tales.


I'm also on the list for best fan production for my work as Reviews Editor for The Specusphere. This is a nice bit of recognition for the eight years I've spent in this voluntary post, and is especially poignant because The Specusphere closed down just last week. We were all worn out, I think, and especially our webmistress, Amanda Greenslade, who now has a business to run, with two young children at her feet!

Vale Specusphere. It served a very useful place in the Aussie spec-fic scene and won a lot of respect for its reviews and articles. However, there are several other webzines that will, I am sure, close the gap left by 'The Spec'.

Hard on the heels of Swancon come the 6th IPEd National Editors Conference and the national SF convention, this year to be held at Conflux in Canberra. I shall be on panels at both these events, and I'm really looking forward to catching up with interstate colleagues in both editing and writing.

So the year doesn't look like getting any less busy! I'll try to keep you posted by blogging all these events.
Tuesday, 12 February 2013

New e-books by writerly friends



Three of my friends have ebooks out, just dying to be read.


Reunion, the second book in Joanna Fay's Siaris Quartet is out from Musa.The baddest of horrible baddies, Xereth, is still reeling from the loss of his children. He has bided his time and waited years for the perfect time to exact revenge ...


This one is only available from Musa at present but it will no doubt soon be found on Amazon and the other usual outlets  And of course the first book in the series, Daughter of Hope, is still available, too.








And hot off the press, so to speak, is Rowan Hagen's Fearless. When Joss sets off down the south coast, she is fleeing both a miserable marriage and her lonely childhood. Fleeing from all her wasted years. At the same time she is pursuing the magnetic, free-living Karmi, who embodies everything Joss wants to be, even after their shared adventures come to an abrupt end. Finding her proves not so easy, and Joss finds herself thrust into town life in Mungabula, where she takes on Karmi's model of courage to absolve her past.

And not the least of her challenges is the laconic but disarming Fletch…
 






Lastly, here's an old favourite, now available as an ebook. The Chicken Thief, by Fiona Leonard, has to be one of the best reads of the last few years. It's funny, whimsical and touching, and you can buy it on Amazon. 



Do check these books  out - I'm sure you'll love at least one of them, no matter what your taste in reading material!
Monday, 31 December 2012

2012 - a reading restrospective


My reading intentions for 2012 grew faster than I could possibly work my way down the list. I now have a to-be-read shelf that holds over 90 books – and that’s not counting the ones lurking on my nice new Kindle, which family members bought for me for Christmas! So I have enough material to keep me going right through 2013 and well beyond!

I tried out Kindle for Desktop and Kindle for iPhone before taking the plunge and asking the family to chip in for a Kindle hand-held device. I decided on a Kindle because it is not backlit and is therefore pretty easy on the eyes. So far, I’m really pleased with it. The only thing that gave me any trouble was getting Kindle books not purchased from Amazon off my computer and onto the device, which was a frustrating exercise. I finally discovered a way of doing it that involved plugging the Kindle into the computer via a USB port, doing a search for the required title in Kindle for Desktop in Windows Explorer and then dragging and dropping the file from Explorer to the Kindle. I could not, for some reason, just drag the title from Kindle for Desktop to the plugged-in Kindle. Amazon, I suppose, would much prefer that I bought all books from them, so they weren’t going to make it easy for me!

I’ve read quite a bit of non-fiction, as usual, ranging from The Anne Boleyn Collection by Claire Ridgeway to a number of ‘how-to-write’ books, such as Marketing for Authors, by Anna Revel. One non-fiction book I especially liked was Inside HBO’s Game of Thrones by Bryan Cogman. I utterly adore the GRR Martin books and the HBO DVDs based on them, so fannish material relating to the series goes down well in my house! In addition to the non-fiction, I read no fewer than 172 short stories for the Aurealis Awards, and at least another eighty for the ASIM slush pile! And that's without even thinking of the books and theses I've critiqued or edited for clients! The list of novels, therefore, is a bit shorter than usual. Here it is, with a few comments:

 Daughter of Hope by Joanna Fay: A disclaimer here – Jo is a personal friend and I had the privilege of critiquing this book during its creation. Jo is one of the most imaginative people I’ve ever met and this book reflects that, in spades! You can buy the e-book from Musa. Be sure to watch out for the sequel, coming very soon!

 Daughter of Smoke and Bone by Laini Taylor - and its sequel, Days of Blood and Starlight. This series promises to be a winner in the trilogy realm. The story is truly original and the characters very different from the archetypal stock characters so often found in fantasy.  

Etiquette and Espionage by Gail Carriger – a teenage romp with a nod in the direction of steampunk. A short, easy read and lots of fun. Watch out for others in the series, too.  

John Saturnall's Feast by Lawrence Norfolk – a somewhat ‘literary’ novel with speculative elements. It’s beautifully written, rather along the lines of Ken Follett's Pillars of the Earth, but the story is somewhat slight.

Vengeance by Ian Irvine and its sequel, Rebellion - the beginnings of another promising trilogy, with lots of adventure and plot twists. Irvine is a master of the cliff hanger and I sat up far too late on some nights as a result!  

Red Country by Joe Abercrombie – this has got to be one of the best books of 2012. It’s definitely my top pick, being at least as good as Abercrombie's first book, The Blade Itself, which I don’t think he’s ever bettered until now.  

Shadowfell by Juliet Marillier , and also Flame of Sevenwaters from the same pen – that of another friend and one of my favourite authors. Like fans all over the world, I hang out for Juliet Marillier's next book every year! Fortunately, she is a prolific writer and this year we got not only another Sevenwaters book but the start of a brand-new series that could well rival its older sibling. I’m now hanging out for the sequel to Shadowfell!

Stormlord's Exile by Glenda Larke - still another friend from conventions and the blogosphere! (Perth is a small place and has produced more than its fair share of excellent writers.) I think this might even be Larke’s best book to date. She gets better with every tome to hit the shelves. However, she’s worth reading right from the start, with her debut novel Havenstar now available as an e-book on Smashwords.  

Sharp Shooter by Marianne Delacourt - if this book is any guide, this series constitutes a fun romp around the suburbs of Perth with an adventurous young woman who can read auras and therefore see when people are up to no good. An easy read and well worth a look.

The Aphrodite Inheritance by Michael J, Bird – this drama is a blast from the past, now available as an e-book. I absolutely adored the TV series written by Bird in the 1970s, and in fact I still have all of them, converted to DVD format. All Bird’s scripts were set in the Greek islands, and this alone is a good enough reason to make them keepers!  

The Gallows Thief by Bernard Cornwell. I also read several books in the Sharpe series by this author, but some volumes seem to have been lost in one of my many moves from one house-sit to another, and as I want to read them in chronological order the project has ground to a halt until I can find or replace the missing books. I love Cornwell’s work as his historical research is so thorough, but I like his first person books better than those written in the third person as he tends to use an omniscient viewpoint involving a good deal of head-hopping, which I find a tad irritating.  

The Missing Case (Hal Junior 2) by Simon Haynes, yet another friend. I had the privilege of editing the first of the Hal Junior Books, and it was a hoot! This one is just as good and highly recommended for the senior primary age group.  

To Spin a Darker Stair by Tehani Wessely (ed) – wow, this is one of the treasures of 2012. Two novellas, back to back, each one a gem. Again, I must confess to friendship with the editor. I think all Tehani’s colleagues would agree with me that she is one of the best editors of short fiction in this country. She has further consolidated her position with Epilogue - twelve solid, workmanlike stories from twelve of Australia’s best SF short story writers. Like its predecessor, After the Rain, the theme of this anthology centres on what might happen in a post-apocalyptic world. Unlike After the Rain, however, Epilogue presents a face of hope, with each story having an upbeat quality that makes us consider the indomitability of the human spirit.  

Whispers Underground by Ben Aaronovitch takes us on another helter-skelter ride with DC Peter Grant, the cop-cum-apprentice magician who can see ghosts. If you haven’t discovered Aaronovitch yet, you’re missing a treat! You can find reviews of most of these books (and many more) over at The Specusphere.

Here’s to many happy hours of reading in 2013!
Thursday, 11 October 2012

Re-inventing myself - yet again



Every few years, it seems, circumstances conspire to create drastic changes in my life. This latest re-invention of Satima has brought me a huge change of lifestyle, from being an itinerant house-sitter to living in a tiny bedsit on the fourth floor of a large apartment block.

My new home is in Bentley, a suburb close to Perth. The bedsit, of course, only has one room where I must live and sleep, and that room measures just three metres by five metres. It has a sunny little balcony with a pleasant outlook, a perfectly acceptable kitchen and a neat bathroom with an excellent, large shower. It's in a secure building, maintenance is available on call and it's only 20 mins into Perth on the bus - as long as you don't travel in peak hours! What's more, it is very quiet, and having spent so much time in retreat houses, silence is something I treasure.

But oh dear, I have far too many books, CDs and DVDs for a bedsit! I also have a large number of casette tapes - old recordings that I haven't been able to replace digitally. I'm going to have to do as one of my sons suggested - just not allow myself to buy any more books or discs unless what I want is genuinely not available as a download. And having read a book, I must decide at once whether or not it's a 'keeper'. Of course, I have about a dozen favourite authors whose oeuvres I treasure, and I'll never willingly part with those in hard copy.

My family history research is another problem - I really need to keep the hard copies because this is work for future generations, and who knows these days what technology will be outmoded in ten years, let alone fifty or hundred! I have the family tree in a database, of course, but the original certificates, letters, copies of archival documents etc are all safely stored in archival quality materials. They take up a lot of space and I need to buy still another set of shelves...

Nearly two weeks in, and the place is still a mess I'd hoped to put pictures up to show you the chaos, but the pix are on the iPhone and iPhone and the computer, it seems, are no longer on speaking terms. (This too, will pass, I hope!)

I'm embarking on a whole new lifestyle, and it will take time to adjust, but I can see that once I get used to it, I am going to love living here. Already I'm enjoying sitting on the balcony for a while each day to eat a leisurely lunch, with the sun on my back and the spring winds gently stirring the trees that line the quiet street below. I'm looking forward to sharing the experience with visitors, so I hope friends who live in or visit Perth will 'come up and see me sometime'!


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