About Me
- Satima Flavell
- I am a writer, editor and reviewer based in Perth, Western Australia. I specialise in historical and high or epic fantasy. If you have a manuscript in preparation, don't waste money on editing too early. Instead, let me help with a mini-assessment of your work, based on careful reading of your synopsis and first 20 pages. Then, when you've worked on the manuscript in line with our discussions, I will be happy to do a full edit before you send it off into the big wide world. My fees are very reasonable - for more about my editing work, CLICK HERE
Buy Mythic Resonance
Got a Kindle? Check out Mythic Resonance,
an excellent anthology that includes my short story 'La Belle Dame', together with great stories from Alan Baxter, Donna Maree Hanson, Sue Burstynski, Nike Sulway and nine more fantastic authors! Just $3.99 from Amazon.
Prefer hard copy?
For Readers, Writers & Editors
- A dilemma about characters
- Adelaide Writers Week, 2009
- Adjectives, commas and confusion
- An artist's conflict
- An editor's role
- Authorial voice, passive writing and the passive voice
- Common misuses: common expressions
- Common misuses: confusing words
- Common misuses: pronouns - subject and object
- Conversations with a character
- Critiquing Groups
- Does length matter?
- Dont sweat the small stuff: formatting
- Free help for writers
- How much magic is too much?
- Know your characters via astrology
- Like to be an editor?
- Modern Writing Techniques
- My best reads of 2007
- My best reads of 2008
- My favourite dead authors
- My favourite modern authors
- My influential authors
- Planning and Flimmering
- Planning vs Flimmering again
- Psychological Spec-Fic
- Readers' pet hates
- Reading, 2009
- Reality check: so you want to be a writer?
- Sensory detail is important!
- Speculative Fiction - what is it?
- Spelling reform?
- Substantive or linking verbs
- The creative cycle
- The promiscuous artist
- The revenge of omni rampant
- The value of "how-to" lists for writers
- Write a decent synopsis
- Writers block 1
- Writers block 2
- Writers block 3
- Writers need editors!
- Writers, Depression and Addiction
- Writing in dialect, accent or register
Interviews with authors
My Blog List
-
THE TOIL OF WORMS - A LETTER OF BERNARD OF CLAIRVEAUX - Today's research snippet. Items from the Chalcis hoard - 14th/15thCBernard of Clairveaux 1090-1153 was a great letter writer. His epistles were frequently...25 minutes ago
-
Hacks for Hacks: The Basics of Author Branding - The highway to publication overflows with cars: luxury behemoths; sensible hybrids; nondescript, windowless vans with strange dents that protrude from the ...1 hour ago
-
On Friendship with kings and gods - I think today my examiner article will be about friendship with Christ, God the Son. Maybe even friendship with God the Holy Spirit. Friendship with God t...4 hours ago
-
RT Book Reviews Video Interview; IGMS Review of THD - Welcome to Saturday. First: Look! A video interview with me from RT Book Reviews, taken during the Booklover’s Convention a couple of weeks ago in Kansas ...4 hours ago
-
Nostalgia Vacations and Indoor Volcanoes - There was another report this week about the rise in the traditional British holiday. Part of this is down to economics – ever since the financial melt dow...7 hours ago
-
Wallpaper, All Shook Up. - I get an email regularly from National Geographic showing me pictures of the month. Some of these can be used as wallpapers (backgrounds) on one’s computer...7 hours ago
-
Reincarnation among the Norse: Sifting through the Evidence - This short article looks at the possibilty of reincarnation as a common alternative concept of life after death among Germanic heathens and then as a possi...10 hours ago
-
Book Review: The Resurrectionist by E.B. Hudspeth - Title: The Resurrectionist Author: E.B. Hudspeth Genre: Historical, Horror, Speculative Fiction Publisher: Quirk Books Publication Date: May 2013 Hardco...11 hours ago
-
Star Trek Into Darkness - Pic by Eva Rinaldi Wednesday night I went with friends to my local cinema, the Classic, to see Star Trek:Into Darkness. The photo is not from the Classic...13 hours ago
-
Reed Farrel Coleman - Reed Farrel Coleman's eighth and latest Moe Prager mystery is Onion Street. Late last month I asked the author about what he was reading. Coleman's reply:La...18 hours ago
-
Results of the “Help I’m Looking For” Writers’ Survey - I did a survey of folks on my Writing Tips newsletter, many of whom have dropped out of regular readership. Many of whom have a good reason for doing so. T...18 hours ago
-
How To Use Auto Responder Emails to Boost Your Blogging Efforts - This is a guest contribution by Asher Elran of Dynamic Search. I thought emails were a waste of time and that they are ignored, but then I learned how to d...21 hours ago
-
Flogometer for Laura: would you turn the first page? - I'm off to do my Killer First Page workshop at Write on the River in Wenatchee this weekend. It should be an interesting session--34 people submitted first p...22 hours ago
-
BITTER SEEDS – Editorial Love-In… - We’re bowled over to see such fantastic support from the editorial team at Orbit Books for Ian Tregillis‘s superb Milkweed trilogy. Over on the Orbit Books...22 hours ago
-
Tagging our past - A little over a year ago, we developed a new feature in Discovery (our catalogue) that allows our users to add their own tags to our records. Tags are a wa...23 hours ago
-
Friday Facts - A post with some random and interesting facts about Edward II, his life and his family. :-) - Edward's mother Eleanor of Castile was half-Spanish and half...1 day ago
-
Win a 100-Page Critique From Janice Hardy - *By Janice Hardy, @Janice Hardy* For the last several years I've participated in the Brenda Novak online auction for Diabetes research. This is a fantas...1 day ago
-
Physical Attribute Entry: Chest - *Physical description of a character can be difficult to convey—too much will slow the pace or feel 'list-like', while too little will not allow readers t...1 day ago
-
Why BITTER SEEDS blew me away - [image: Bitter Seeds]As an editor, there’s no better feeling than reading a submission that blinds you with its sheer brilliance. It doesn’t happen often...1 day ago
-
A Book A Week - Hotel on the Corner of Bitter and Sweet - Hotel on the Corner of Bitter and Sweet - Jamie Ford I've been waiting a long time to read this book. Well, not this book exactly, but rather a well plo...1 day ago
-
It’s A Outrage! - “It’s a outrage!” my plumber Sam bellowed through the phone. I held the phone as far from my ear as I could. “Um, Sam, what’s this about? I paid that inv...1 day ago
-
Creative writing prize – Larbert High School - As part of my work as Patron of Reading for the wonderful Larbert High School, I recently judged the best creative writing examples from the Higher English...1 day ago
-
Forum Writing Challenges! - Who out there likes to write short stories?! Over in our Notepad Forum we’ve revived one of our old website’s popular ideas- a writing challenge! The idea ...1 day ago
-
The Past Future of Publishing. - When most writers think about the future of publishing they think about a world where the ease of e-publishing leads to the market being flooded by m...1 day ago
-
Among the Beautiful Living Dead – the movie - If I had to nominate which of my short stories has generated the most questions from fans, it’d have to be “Entre les Beaux Morts en Vie” (“Among the Beaut...1 day ago
-
Short Story Competition Win - Over at carolryles.net, I blog about my win in the Conflux 9 short story competition. I’m especially pleased about this as the story, "The Silence of Clock...1 day ago
-
Short Story Competition Win - My short story, “The Silence of Clockwork”, picked up third prize in the Conflux 9 short story competition. I’m especially pleased about this as the story ...1 day ago
-
AWW2013 Crime Roundup #4 - Honey Brown’s latest novel DARK HORSE galloped (sorry, couldn’t resist the pun) to the top of the most reviewed crime novel list for Challenge participants...1 day ago
-
Nebulas! and Baycon! So come and see me... - I'm having a busy two weeks. This is a good thing. This weekend I'm attending the Nebula awards, which is in San Jose this year. This is a great event for ...1 day ago
-
Outrageous French Copyright Grab: ReLIRE Goes Live - *Posted by Victoria Strauss for Writer Beware* Just over a year ago, I wrote about a new French law that, under the guise of dealing with the pressing is...1 day ago
-
Tweet Smarter with FollowerWonk - FollowerWonk is a powerful tool that can help authors tweet smarter. We explain what it does and why you should use it. [image: Writer]1 day ago
-
Tweet Smarter with FollowerWonk - FollowerWonk is a powerful tool that can help authors tweet smarter. We explain what it does and why you should use it. [image: Writer]1 day ago
-
You keep using that word - Almost every “how to write” book I’ve ever seen has a section devoted to style. Or sometimes voice. Or sometimes one for each. Frequently with vaporous dec...2 days ago
-
Character Column: Meet Emma Lane and her ‘three sisters’ - Today, we are joined by romance author, Emma Lane, and not one, but three of her favourite characters from her Regency Romance series, The Vicar’s Daughter...2 days ago
-
Dakota FitzPercy & the End of the World - Ever wondered why the world didn’t end last December? Now, for the first time, the whole story is made public. Well, more public than Dakota’s facebook pag...2 days ago
-
Compare My Manuscript to a Famous Book—A Writer’s Question - A reader's asks whether or not to compare a manuscript with other books in query letters and elevator pitches.2 days ago
-
THUMBNAIL THURSDAY GETS HITCHED - Ah, wedding humour. It's quick, it's easy, and it's infinitely variable. This is one of them. *What do you mean, "What are the options?"?*2 days ago
-
Mediaeval sex and stoats. - Hail, Please let me bang on at great length about something I know sod all about. And notice the not two but three sexual terms pressed close together in ...2 days ago
-
More Christian than you can poke a stick at - In response to some recent silly and strange claims on the net regarding the history of the Golden Dawn, I recently reposted to Facebook an old post, A Pag...3 days ago
-
I am a Superhero - Batman, Batman, Batman. Everyone wants to be Batman. But I have no such aspiration. For I am a superhero already. I am *not* Batman. I am *Night Writer*, ...3 days ago
-
KSP WRITERS’ CENTRE 2013/14 RESIDENCY PROGRAM - KSP WRITERS’ CENTRE 2013/14 RESIDENCY PROGRAM Applications closing soon 2013 Young Writers-In-Residence Applications for 2013 Young Writer-In-Residence...4 days ago
-
AWWC 2013: The Singing Mountain by Anne E. Summers - I mentioned I was reading this book as an e-book a while back and, yes it has taken me a while to do a proper review but here we go. *The Singing Mountain*...4 days ago
-
Tuesday Fiction: “Synchronicity” by Victor Fernando R. Ocampo - Today’s Tuesday Fiction is by Victor Fernando R. Ocampo. Victor is from the Philippines, and his work has been published in the Philippine Free Press and t...4 days ago
-
-
A giant TOUR catch up. Also, we wear the same boots. - I need to get back to blogging. Too many things are stacking up, and I'm paying attention over on Twitter and Tumblr and such, but not here, and really, th...4 days ago
-
This Is Why John Buscema Was A Better Artist Than You - Years, and I mean years, ago I remember having an argument in a comic book store in Melbourne with some idiot who spent the better part of the afternoon tryi...4 days ago
-
ME & HIM: A Guide to Recovery aids Suicide Prevention - Living is So BIG, an international suicide prevention website published ‘From MADNESS to Recovery’ the story behind my tell-all memoir ME & HER: A Memoir...4 days ago
-
Acceptance - Reblogged from countingletters: On the train home from university this afternoon, I boarded a carriage with very few spare seats. I set up shop (read: posi...4 days ago
-
Update from Rio - *The renovated staircase leading up to the Buddha Vihara* Hi Friends, Namo Buddhaya, I have been in Rio De Janeiro staying at the Rio Buddha Vihara for th...4 days ago
-
Unbundling in the book business: the fourth big trend - A few weeks ago, I wrote that there are three big forces driving the future of publishing: scale, verticalization, and atomization. I was wrong. I had forg...4 days ago
-
And then there was cake... - We have an announcement. A very important announcement. We have a new cake-maker in the House! Yes, it's true. A new cake-maker. And she has certainly wo...5 days ago
-
Spam poetry never sleeps - Cynthia’s offering du jour: Je suis un dĂ©butant Ă ce forum, by Cynthia Mershark I ultimately stumbled upon 2 types of people: well-informed people I don’t ...5 days ago
-
MtLawleyshire’s Hyde Park in Autumn - I took a break from my studies and risked it – I went down to Hyde Park yesterday – a sunny day after days of rain & storm. We had more rain in 2 days tha...6 days ago
-
Pilot Boat - Just a little something today. Pilot boats were a constant feature during last year's cruise since pilots were required to navigate the harbours, rivers, ...6 days ago
-
The Great Gatsby - There was a competition that I entered this week, to create an artwork inspired by the Great Gatsby. No images or stills from the new movie could be used....6 days ago
-
Haunted House - *Now available on Kindle for $3.99.* *BEYOND AFRAID...* It was an experiment in fear. Eight people, each chosen because they lived through a terrifying e...1 week ago
-
On reading widely and the power of titles - It was Stephen King who said, “If you don’t have the time to read, you don’t have the time or the tools to write. Simple as that.” And let’s be honest, Ste...1 week ago
-
A blog about stuff - I’m back at work. I’ve uploaded everything I need to this semester in the Masters yesterday. I went to Veronica Parsons’ book launch for Murder in the Moat...1 week ago
-
Japanese Cover! - *Jyo-ou Heika no Majyutu-shi* *Wizard of Her Majesty* Boy Nightingale is well BishĆnen ain't he?1 week ago
-
Book Review: Marlo Can Fly, by Robert Vescio - Marlo Can Fly is a new Australian picture book by Robert Vescio, illustrated by Sandra Temple and published by Wombat Books in 2013. Marlo Can Fly is a lo...1 week ago
-
Congratulations to Tansy and Margo - It’s been a busy week and I’ve only just gotten around to updating the ROR blog after the national SF Con, Conflux. Donna and Nicole and the team did a won...1 week ago
-
Editing today - I was asked for advice on becoming a book editor, and of course, as a young friend calls me, I'm the dreamkiller. I go around being "realistic" and/or "neg...1 week ago
-
Book Promotion Tip of the Week #12: Get Lucky, and Live with the Guilt - To Warn Prospective Buyers or Not To Warn: That Is the Question This week, the outstanding American novelist Claire Messud published her fourth book of fic...1 week ago
-
Interview with upcoming author Ada Slowe! - I am extremely pleased to share this interview with you from upcoming author Ada Slowe! Her debut novel, The Power of Love, launches August 15th, 2013. Be ...2 weeks ago
-
-
Catalina's Choice. - Today I finished the third edit of Catalina's Choice! 114,000 words. I shall leave it for a time, like a cake, baked, now let it settle, and then the feast...2 weeks ago
-
The Lascar's Dagger - I made this big announcement at Conflux, the Australian National Convention, and I believe the news has also been sent to Locus, so I am making it public. ...2 weeks ago
-
Much Ado About Nothing finds Aussie distributor. - Sharmill Films has acquired Joss Whedon’s adaptation of Much Ado. It will be released in Australia later this year. Click here to read the details and watc...2 weeks ago
-
The Ursuline Experience of Slavery - A zealous commitment to social justice and human rights has not always been an attribute of the Catholic Church. Although Saint Thomas Aquinas wrote in th...2 weeks ago
-
A Series Ian Likes: The Dragonriders Of Pern - They’re fantasy’s most beloved megafauna. Feared for their deadly flame, famed for their miserliness, they have somehow come to be a symbol for the magical...2 weeks ago
-
Still life with exotic jug (102) - Sticking with the still life theme, this one of an exotic jug with fruit is my first water colour painting. Again, I painted it at my friend Sue’s house. ...2 weeks ago
-
Post-Swancon post - One of the best presentations at Swancon 2013 was Gail Simone's Guest speech, where she asked us what spec fic had given us... So I thought it was worth wr...3 weeks ago
-
Edward de Grazia, the lawyer who fought book censorship & wrote Girls Lean Back Everywhere - In a 2008 post about Banned Books Week, I recommended an excellent 1992 book about literary censorship and obscenity prosecutions in the United States, Edw...3 weeks ago
-
Proceeding as per usual and nothing to report - Time travel would mess up nearly everything. Without strict controls there could easily arise a situation where the natural progression of things precludes...4 weeks ago
-
What day is it??? - A writer’s life can be a strange ephemeral world in which we waft about finding meaning in the sound of the wind or a blade of grass…..or in reality we won...5 weeks ago
-
It's PR, darling! Branding an author, and other interesting pastimes - ** *All-new, value for money, always satisfied...* *Why do I feel like I'm...well, you know - SELLING myself?** * * -----------------------------------...5 weeks ago
-
The Age of Play - Paul Klee, "Love"How to Set the Stage for a Creative and Compassionate LifeLiving happily and successfully requires a rich fantasy life, the ability to ima...1 month ago
-
Finalist BBC Wildlife Artist of the year 2013 - I am delighted to be able to report that I have had three of my paintings accepted into the finals of the BBC Wildlife Artist of the year competition 2013....1 month ago
-
#242 - Dear QueryShark: His code name: Kangaroo. His special ability: The Pocket--a unique portal into an empty "pocket universe," which Kangaroo can use to smug...1 month ago
-
E-book vs. Traditional Publishing: Pros and Cons - by Annette Lyon With the huge boom of e-book publishing, particularly self-publishing, writers today have more options than ever before. What to do? Are th...1 month ago
-
Are you a Freelance Copy Editor? - Are you an experienced freelance copy editor who has an interest in working with self-publishing writers? We (BubbleCow) are currently looking for two co...1 month ago
-
One Publisher’s Journey - Guest Post by Benjamin LeRoy I’ve been a steady lurker on the Absolute Write forums since 2005. Every now and again I jump into a thread if I feel like the...1 month ago
-
-
This Blog has moved to www.gailgaymermaritn.com - This blog has been moved to www.gailgaymermartin.com Please visit my Writing Fiction Blog there filled with the same comprehensive information and many mo...2 months ago
-
So much happening, so little blogging... - I called my blog The Best Audience Award because, as well as feeling "not good enough" as a maker (writer, photographer, whatever I might otherwise post) I...2 months ago
-
Query letter #10: Mitch H - A monastic trained orphan with a talent for Sorcery, Caldan's entire world dissolves when he learns his family was murdered, almost kills his friend's bro...2 months ago
-
Writers [on Writing]: Maureen Howard - Writers [on Writing]: Maureen Howard *‘Reading, real reading, is a strenuous and pleasurable contact sport.’* Maureen Howard, *The Enduring Commitment of...3 months ago
-
Can you use my Word book cover design? - Using word to design a book cover Microsoft Word is not appropriate software to use for an actual book cover design, however it is great if you've cre...3 months ago
-
Incredible article on Photographer Joel Grimes - I was having a chuckle at the first two minutes of this video and got to thinking how similar it sounded to me growing up. From pulling things apart and no...3 months ago
-
Tinye gifte for Valentynes Daye: Amour Ys Lyke a Potel of Wyne - O gentil rederes of my blog, how grete the peynes smerte that come to me whanne Ich thinken upon my lakke of updatinge. Swich grete busynesse hath fallen u...3 months ago
-
-
Just writing & associated thoughts - What sets me writing? I know people ask this of writers & now I'm asking it of myself. I'm pulling out of a long de-motivated block of time and getting s...3 months ago
-
Tarnished Crown #1 is done - sort of! - Insofar as it has a beginning, a middle and an end. So now people with less mushy brains than me can rip it to shreds so I can rewrite it and make it bette...4 months ago
-
Edward IV's marriage to Elizabeth Woodville - An evil fairy almost made me include 'supposed', 'bigamous' or 'purported' in that title. After all, in a world where at least one author has put Richard I...4 months ago
-
Messenger Feast - * Kivgiqsuat, Messenger Feast, Inuit of Alaska* *"After the separation of the summer months the villagers begin socializing with other village groups. Durin...4 months ago
-
Greatness and power wait within us all. Oh, and merry Christmas! - Not long after I got back from my massive US journey, I participated in a local Christmas project: a flash mob that would go to one of the shopping malls, ...5 months ago
-
Defining the Target Audience for Your Fiction - So you’re writing a novel and your critique buddies want to know who your “target audience” is. What do you tell them? Nee posted this question on my “Ask ...5 months ago
-
"It is only a Black Dog, I am a wolf" - Hail, I have not been writing much lately, now I will try to write about why I can't write, and why I actually think it is possible I am going a little b...8 months ago
-
Rev. Johann Polhemus' deadly scrapes - *© Christy K Robinson* He survived war, bubonic plague, trans-Atlantic travel, 20 years in the equatorial rainforest, two pirate attacks, two years' separa...8 months ago
-
LoNoWriMo - LoNoWriMo is local novel writing month, and this is my second in a row. LoNoWriMo is where you sit down at your computer and write a novel in a month, with...9 months ago
Favourite Sites
- Bren McDibble
- Celestine Lyons
- Guy Gavriel Kay
- Hal Spacejock (Simon Haynes)
- Jacqueline Carey
- Jennifer Fallon
- Jessica Vivien
- Joel Fagin
- Juliet Marillier
- KA Bedford
- Karen Miller
- KSP Writers Centre
- Lynn Flewelling
- Marianne de Pierres
- Phill Berrie
- Ryan Flavell
- Satima's Professional Editing Services
- SF Novelists' Blog
- SF Signal
- Shane Jiraiya Cummings
- Society of Editors, WA
- Stephen Thompson
- The Specusphere
- Yellow wallpaper
Sunday, 10 April 2011
Common misuses: common expressions
When editing or critiquing, and even in everyday conversation, I am often jolted by the misuse of common expressions, so I thought I might don my pedant’s hat today and talk about some of them in this post.
As Such
One of these misused expressions is “as such”. This phrase is seldom used correctly these days, and its incorrect use often renders the sentence laughable. Some people misuse the phrase completely because they have mistaken its meaning, thinking it means “therefore”, which is just plain silly.
In order to make sense, “as such”, a pronominal phrase, must refer back to a noun in the previous sentence or clause. It cannot be used to refer to a verb.
Consider this: “I’ve worked in the hospitality industry for some years now. As such, I’ve learnt a lot about cleaning equipment.” The speaker obviously intends “as such” to refer to “worked” which is the verb in the previous sentence, but grammatically, “as such” can only refer to a noun. You could say, however, “I’ve been a hotel room attendant for some years now. As such...etc”.
Partake of/partake in/take part
Another word whose misuse is becoming widespread is “partake”. It really means “to take a share” and has traditionally been used to refer to the sharing of food, as in “We partook of a delicious seafood banquet last night”. However, it has long been used in a figurative sense, as in “partaking in each other’s joys”, which carries the implication of sharing. The difference between the two usages lies in the accompanying pronoun, in or of. If we partake of, we each take a share of something – I eat my share of the food, you eat yours. If we partake in, we share mutually – your joys are also mine, my joys are also yours. Can you see the subtle difference between the two?
But the main problem is that some people are now using “partake” where they should use “take part”, as in “We partook in a football match yesterday”, which to my mind ruins a nice, rather subtle little expression. However, language is constantly changing and I don’t think I can do anything to stop this particular change!
Two more misuses can only be seen in writing, as both ways of using them sound the same in speech. I’m talking about “all together” vs “altogether” and “on to” vs “onto”. Let’s look at the second phrase first.
Onto/on to
The word “onto” is quite new. It used to be considered altogether incorrect when I was a child. However, it is now considered quite OK to say “I put the plate onto the shelf”, and there’s nothing wrong with that. Where the word gets misused is in sentences such as “He went onto say how pleased he was with the new house” or even “The plane flew onto London”! In cases such as these, where something is definitely not being superimposed on something else, we should leave the two words separate.
Altogether/all together
I hope I haven’t got you altogether confused because I’ll now go on to “all together”. When we do something as a group we do it all together, as in “We left the party all together”.
The word “altogether” is another matter altogether.
If you were to write the sample sentence as “We left the party altogether” it would mean that you left the party absolutely, utterly and completely, never to return. You might apply that to a political party, but not the social gathering sort of party, which you might have left early because you were tired, not because you were in high dudgeon over something, although I suppose that’s also possible!
I plan to do a few more of these posts, so if you have any words or phrases that you're not sure how to use, let me know and I'll try to incorporate them.
As Such
One of these misused expressions is “as such”. This phrase is seldom used correctly these days, and its incorrect use often renders the sentence laughable. Some people misuse the phrase completely because they have mistaken its meaning, thinking it means “therefore”, which is just plain silly.
In order to make sense, “as such”, a pronominal phrase, must refer back to a noun in the previous sentence or clause. It cannot be used to refer to a verb.
Consider this: “I’ve worked in the hospitality industry for some years now. As such, I’ve learnt a lot about cleaning equipment.” The speaker obviously intends “as such” to refer to “worked” which is the verb in the previous sentence, but grammatically, “as such” can only refer to a noun. You could say, however, “I’ve been a hotel room attendant for some years now. As such...etc”.
Partake of/partake in/take part
Another word whose misuse is becoming widespread is “partake”. It really means “to take a share” and has traditionally been used to refer to the sharing of food, as in “We partook of a delicious seafood banquet last night”. However, it has long been used in a figurative sense, as in “partaking in each other’s joys”, which carries the implication of sharing. The difference between the two usages lies in the accompanying pronoun, in or of. If we partake of, we each take a share of something – I eat my share of the food, you eat yours. If we partake in, we share mutually – your joys are also mine, my joys are also yours. Can you see the subtle difference between the two?
But the main problem is that some people are now using “partake” where they should use “take part”, as in “We partook in a football match yesterday”, which to my mind ruins a nice, rather subtle little expression. However, language is constantly changing and I don’t think I can do anything to stop this particular change!
Two more misuses can only be seen in writing, as both ways of using them sound the same in speech. I’m talking about “all together” vs “altogether” and “on to” vs “onto”. Let’s look at the second phrase first.
Onto/on to
The word “onto” is quite new. It used to be considered altogether incorrect when I was a child. However, it is now considered quite OK to say “I put the plate onto the shelf”, and there’s nothing wrong with that. Where the word gets misused is in sentences such as “He went onto say how pleased he was with the new house” or even “The plane flew onto London”! In cases such as these, where something is definitely not being superimposed on something else, we should leave the two words separate.
Altogether/all together
I hope I haven’t got you altogether confused because I’ll now go on to “all together”. When we do something as a group we do it all together, as in “We left the party all together”.
The word “altogether” is another matter altogether.
If you were to write the sample sentence as “We left the party altogether” it would mean that you left the party absolutely, utterly and completely, never to return. You might apply that to a political party, but not the social gathering sort of party, which you might have left early because you were tired, not because you were in high dudgeon over something, although I suppose that’s also possible!
I plan to do a few more of these posts, so if you have any words or phrases that you're not sure how to use, let me know and I'll try to incorporate them.
| Reactions: |
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
7 comments:
Dunno about your part of the world Satima, but on this side of the puddle there are many misuses of words and or phrases. One of my bĂȘtes noirs is could've or should've which is frequently interpreted and often written as 'could of, should of' people having no idea it is a shortened form of could have or should have. When I see it in a book it really tees me off.
Yup, they happen here, too. Another odd one is "I got then off of my mother" and others of like ilk.
We now have a generation of people teaching English who have never learnt grammar. Not good.
Oh yes, off of is used here too. One song which used to be a favourite is frequently sung "can't take my eyes off of you" grrrr. There are lots more which I can't call to mind right now. Oh I know, it likely will happen is another phrase. Of course like is a very over used word here, kids can't speak a sentence without using like half a dozen times. We asked a friend's daughter to try saying things without the word for a while, she was no longer able to converse.
Just remembered another thing which drives me up the wall, a picture is hung a person is hanged. If you mention transitive and intransitive verbs to people, you would just get blank stares. My mother used to go nuts about salty, its not salty its salt. That soup was very salt. Of course as Winston said "up with which I shall not put".
I love that song, too, apart from the "off of"!
Of course, language changes and we have to live with it. These days,if we used "salt" as an adjective (apart from the common phrase "salt water") people would think we were ignorant or daft or both. And ending sentences with prepositions is no longer considered wicked, so Mr Churchill would not have to twist his words today.
I'm planning on putting up a post on transitive and intransitive verbs one of these days!
What really irritates me is misuse of the word "reform" in the newspapers. When I was growing up, it meant "to make it better" - a law against sending kids down into the mines or one wiping out slavery is a reform. Closing down schools is not an education reform. Even more irritating is reading, as I have, about "draconian reforms". You'd think journalists would know better.
For the record, I teach grammar and spelling. So does every other teacher I know. But what can you do when a student has grown up on text messages and, before that, chat rooms, where it's perfectly legitimate to spell "and" & (I got a story in slush recently that did this) and "Thanks" "thanx" or even "thx" because it costs extra to use too many characters? They forget. They don't mean it, but they forget and hand in work with spelling taken from their mobile phones.
You must be really up against it, Sue. It's good that the system is including grammar in the curriculum again, but a whole generation of teachers went through school without learning any, so how can they teach it properly? I daresay there are some new teachers who also feel it's OK to use l33t and txt spelling because they've grown up with them, too.
Misused words:-( I guess we have to live with them and accept that this is the way words change in meaning. One that bugs me is the use of "convince" when the correct word would be "persuade". The difference between them is another of those subtleties that the language seems to be losing.