About Me
- Satima Flavell
- I am a writer, editor and reviewer based in Perth, Western Australia. I specialise in historical and high or epic fantasy. If you have a manuscript in preparation, don't waste money on editing too early. Instead, let me help with a mini-assessment of your work, based on careful reading of your synopsis and first 20 pages. Then, when you've worked on the manuscript in line with our discussions, I will be happy to do a full edit before you send it off into the big wide world. My fees are very reasonable - for more about my editing work, CLICK HERE
Buy Mythic Resonance
Got a Kindle? Check out Mythic Resonance,
an excellent anthology that includes my short story 'La Belle Dame', together with great stories from Alan Baxter, Donna Maree Hanson, Sue Burstynski, Nike Sulway and nine more fantastic authors! Just $3.99 from Amazon.
Prefer hard copy?
For Readers, Writers & Editors
- A dilemma about characters
- Adelaide Writers Week, 2009
- Adjectives, commas and confusion
- An artist's conflict
- An editor's role
- Authorial voice, passive writing and the passive voice
- Common misuses: common expressions
- Common misuses: confusing words
- Common misuses: pronouns - subject and object
- Conversations with a character
- Critiquing Groups
- Does length matter?
- Dont sweat the small stuff: formatting
- Free help for writers
- How much magic is too much?
- Know your characters via astrology
- Like to be an editor?
- Modern Writing Techniques
- My best reads of 2007
- My best reads of 2008
- My favourite dead authors
- My favourite modern authors
- My influential authors
- Planning and Flimmering
- Planning vs Flimmering again
- Psychological Spec-Fic
- Readers' pet hates
- Reading, 2009
- Reality check: so you want to be a writer?
- Sensory detail is important!
- Speculative Fiction - what is it?
- Spelling reform?
- Substantive or linking verbs
- The creative cycle
- The promiscuous artist
- The revenge of omni rampant
- The value of "how-to" lists for writers
- Write a decent synopsis
- Writers block 1
- Writers block 2
- Writers block 3
- Writers need editors!
- Writers, Depression and Addiction
- Writing in dialect, accent or register
Interviews with authors
My Blog List
-
Guest blogging today - Today, I’m being interviewed over at Ch’kara Silverwolf’s blog! If you would like to join us, here is the link: http://sheerak.wordpress.com/2013/06/18/aut...25 minutes ago
-
Worldbuilding Hangout Update - August schedule - Summer is upon us! As is usual for me in summer, I am traveling a lot and have my kids home from school, which means that for the next several weeks I won'...1 hour ago
-
Ryurik Rostislavich (d. 1208?): the Unsung Champion of the Rostislavichi - One of the most active champions of the Rostislavichi fortunes, whose political career the chroniclers record for some fifty years, was Rostislav’s son Ryu...1 hour ago
-
FEISTY WOMEN IN HISTORY by Theresa Breslin - * * * * *Why is it that highly intelligent, accomplished, able women are viewed with suspicion by men (and other women) and get such a bad press? * *IS...3 hours ago
-
-
Plot, Goal, Inciting Incident—A Reader’s Question - A readers asks about links between plot, character goal, and the inciting incident.6 hours ago
-
How To Spot A Predatory Publisher - The phone rang just as I was sitting down to write my next blog post. One look at the caller ID told me it was trouble. My plumber, Sam, who has an endle...8 hours ago
-
Audio Interviews With Me - Because I know you want to have me in your ear at all times, just like Jiminy Cricket, here are two audio interviews with me. First one is from WYSO’s Book...9 hours ago
-
-
Anna L. Peterson - Anna L. Peterson teaches at the University of Florida. Her research focuses on environmental and social ethics and the relations between animal ethics and an...9 hours ago
-
Top 10 Worst Ways to Die in a Science Fiction Setting - *[image: Abaddon's Gate]We’re thrilled to announce that ABADDON’S GATE (US | UK | AUS) is a New York Times Bestseller hitting the extended trade paperbac...9 hours ago
-
MtLawleyShire: Other People’s Gardens – Yellow Roses - Yellow Roses, and apricot and indeterminate – mixed reds and yellows, orangey, pinkish-yellow – all of those. It’s the last roses post. I’ve read somewher...9 hours ago
-
Defeat Cancer Now by Tamara St John - Defeat Cancer Now by Tamara St John *File Size:* 2212 KB *Print Length:* 206 pages *Page Numbers Source ISBN:* 0988767104 *Publisher:* Tamara St. John...10 hours ago
-
Content Creation vs Content Promotion: Where is the Balance? - A few days ago we published a post on ProBlogger titled ‘Forget about Marketing: Concentrate on Blogging‘, which led to some interesting discussion on Twit...11 hours ago
-
Just Finished Reading... - Some of this is on ebook, some print. I managed to get three of the shortlisted titles for this year's CBCA awards on iBooks - I'm still waiting at school ...14 hours ago
-
Are You Planning for Success? - The publishing world has changed significantly over the past ten years. Publishers have become much more selective about which books they choose to publish...14 hours ago
-
Are You Planning for Success? - The publishing world has changed significantly over the past ten years. Publishers have become much more selective about which books they choose to publish...14 hours ago
-
The Apex Book of World SF Anthologies - The World SF Blog was initially set up to promote the anthology, The Apex Book of World SF, which was later joined by The Apex Book of World SF 2, with a t...15 hours ago
-
And the Winner of the Embarrassment Contest is... - *By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy * It was fun getting back to the contests this week, and you guys gave me some really cringe-worthy moments of embarrassm...15 hours ago
-
Who You Gonna Trust - I ran into an intriguing editing problem recently. A client had a character who was disguising the fact that she was a woman. What made it tricky was that ...16 hours ago
-
Joint Review: The Ocean at the End of the Lane by Neil Gaiman - Title: The Ocean at the End of the Lane Author: Neil Gaiman Genre: Fantasy Publisher: William Morrow (US) / Headline (UK) Publication date: June 2013 H...16 hours ago
-
The White Queen, episode 1 - Edward: I want you.Elizabeth: You can’t have me.Jaquetta: I see dead people.Warwick: Edward!Edward: Let’s get married. Secretly.Elizabeth: Cool!Anthony: He...19 hours ago
-
Community, connection, and solitude - Recently, a couple of things have gotten me thinking about this delicate balance between my need for deep inner silence/listening-silence, uninterrupted fo...21 hours ago
-
Summer Produce. Award - Monday I[image: 002 (2)] was out of fresh asparagus so obviously we had to go and get some. Whilst there I mentioned to Tim Barrie that the chive flowers o...22 hours ago
-
The Clarion West Write-a-thon Needs You - Are you looking for something to encourage you to get back into a regular pattern of writing over the next six weeks? Or are you thinking about pushing you...1 day ago
-
The Clarion West 2013 Write-a-thon Needs You - Are you looking for something to encourage you to get back into a regular pattern of writing over the next six weeks? Or are you thinking about pushing you...1 day ago
-
The Classics. And sexy centaurs. - Hail, First off, here is a description (slightly edited) of baby centaurs at play. It is from a work called Images by Philostratus the Elder, and it is e...1 day ago
-
Publication Day! Links! Tired Neil! - I've been stumbling across the UK, although mostly in and out of the BBC. I spent a day at the Guardian offices, editing their book website. (Here's a vid...1 day ago
-
Travels: random thoughts and images of New Orleans - The 5:2:1 rule of convention going applies to New Orleans. Try to get at least 5 hours of sleep per day, though it needn't be at night. Eat 1 or 2 meals da...1 day ago
-
THE SUMMER QUEEN Giveaway - ANNOUNCING A GIVEAWAY OF THE SUMMER QUEEN: I have 6 signed copies of THE SUMMER QUEEN to give away. 2 for the UK, 2 for the rest of the world and 2 for th...1 day ago
-
Anybody Press is the new member of the Big Six (for ebooks, at least) - Bowker reported last week that 12% of the ebooks being bought now are self-published. There was skepticism about the methodology from The Digital Reader an...1 day ago
-
Here's some fun to be had - 27 days and counting Check out our Kickstarter project for people who like to play: Scrabble Card games Dominoes Please support us by Visiting the Kickstarte...1 day ago
-
The Theatre Royal and The Case of Two Mad King Georges - This coming weekend sees the celebration of London’s West End theatre ‘West End Live‘ which coincides with the 350th anniversary of the Theatre Royal Drury...1 day ago
-
Five rules for e-booking - Reblogged from Simon Petrie: I've been making e-books for the past couple of years now. As with several of the publishing-related skills I've acquired, it'...1 day ago
-
Top 100 ebook and ibook prices. - Now I know you have been impatiently waiting for me to do another survey of prices of the top 100 bestselling ebooks. So here it is. If you’re a wannabe...1 day ago
-
The Night Writer.....ooh! It sounds scary, huh? AND IT IS!! - Okay, so I am a Night Writer. This means that basically, I can't write anything decent before 8pm. From the literary sense, I mean - I can do real job-rela...1 day ago
-
Questions about the brain – 3 - Continuing my answers to the questions schools asked in my Blame My Brain competition, I’m answering the questions posed by the second runner up, the Upper...1 day ago
-
17 June 1239: Birth of King Edward I - Today, or rather the night of 17-18 June, marks the 774th anniversary of the birth of Edward II's father King Edward I at the palace of Westminster in 1239...1 day ago
-
Behold the Midnight Echo shiny and the story of a title - My contributor copies of Midnight Echo Magazine, issue 9, landed in my post box this morning. So shiny. I’m very happy that my story, The Fathomed Wreck To...1 day ago
-
My NEXT book is coming soon!! - WOOHOO! My mental health picture book for KIDS will be launching soon. I’ve collaborated with a super talented children’s illustrator to create a pictur...2 days ago
-
Another volley from the spam poetry battlements - Don’t think of it as a triumph of style over substance, think of it as a triumph of dissonance over entropy. I don’t think Cynthia’s getting any worse. Is ...2 days ago
-
A new home for the Shakespeare Club - Earlier this year, a local paper featured an interview with our president, Frances Dharmalingam, which created a lot of interest and as a result, we found ...2 days ago
-
Sunday Surfing - WRiTE CLUB 2013 - Submissions Open Checklist For Adding Suspence & Intrigue Publishing Spotlight: Interview with John Pitts Why Are We Stepping On Each Ot...2 days ago
-
-
AWWC 2013: Shadow Queen by Deborah Kalin - *Shadow Queen* by Deborah Kalin was published by Allen & Unwin in January 2009. Matilde, heir to the House of Svanaten, is nineteen, of age and more than ...3 days ago
-
Neolithic Remains, Picts and Vikings - Orkney was a veritable centre of Neolithic buildings, from the intriguing stone settings to a settlement like *Skara Brae* - a village older than the pyra...3 days ago
-
Want to Guest Post on Konrath's Blog? - Tess Gerritsen is a damn good thriller writer. I remember reading The Surgeon when it jumped onto the bestseller lists, and being blown away by the deep ch...3 days ago
-
Louise Cusack Workshop today was great… - Saturday JUNE 15 at Burleigh Heads on the Gold Coast, Qld, I’ll be teaching From Character to Plot: Hands-on ideas to create page-turning and saleable nove...3 days ago
-
Physical Traits Entry: Athletic Build - *Physical description of a character can be difficult to convey—too much will slow the pace or feel 'list-like', while too little will not allow readers ...3 days ago
-
Fan Rage, Women & The Hobbit - Now that the new trailer for The Hobbit: The Desolation of Smaug is out and Jackson has shown a clear picture of Evangeline Lilly’s newly-created-for-the-m...4 days ago
-
Learn to fix the biggest mistake writers make in 3 minutes #writers - I put together a fun, but also useful, three-minute writing lesson for you. I’ve thrown in a free printable PDF lesson with built-in worksheets about how t...4 days ago
-
New story out! - My story “Cold, Cold War” has been published at Beneath Ceaseless Skies. This one started from a dream a friend of mine told me she had, about a novel I wi...4 days ago
-
Latest Elizabeth Moon News… - This week saw publication of LIMITS OF POWER, the penultimate volume in Elizabeth Moon‘s Paladin’s Legacy, an epic fantasy series of elves, dragons and kin...4 days ago
-
A Book (or Two) A Week - The Curious Incident of The Dog in the Night-time - The curious incident of the dog in the night-time - Mark Haddon I suspect that there are two ways to review this book. The first is to launch into a det...4 days ago
-
The Next Big Thing Blog Meme - Shadow and Steel by James A. West - Science fiction writer (and writer friend!) Ryan Schneider tagged me to participate in the Next Big Thing Blog Meme. The Next Big Thing is a blog chain in ...4 days ago
-
Spirit Animals – new series from Scholastic including new book from Nix & Williams - During BEA a couple of weeks ago, Scholastic announced a new multi-platform, multi-author fantasy adventure series for readers ages 8–12 that will debut wo...5 days ago
-
LOOKIT THE PURDY BRICKS! - Ha! This whole connecting via the phone thing is working its arse off. Off to Battcon 13 tonight, where we'll be away from all netty distractions for three...5 days ago
-
Police Investigate Pay-to-Play Publisher 2 Moon Press - *Posted by Victoria Strauss for Writer Beware* Pay to play publisher 2 Moon Press, located in Olivet, Michigan, closed abruptly last month, after having b...5 days ago
-
Gary Friedrich vs Marvel Round II - Ghost Rider Lawsuit Reinstated - NEW YORK (AP) -- A federal appeals court in New York has reinstated a lawsuit against comic book publisher Marvel Entertainment by a man who claims he owns t...6 days ago
-
May 2013 Roundup: Classics and Literary - It’s getting exciting here in literary fiction land: we are only a week away from the announcement of this year’s Miles Franklin award. What will win? Carr...6 days ago
-
Onion Origins - AMcF - In celebration of our 25th anniversary of children's publishing we are delighted to present the tenth edition of Onion Origins. *Impossible possibilities*...1 week ago
-
-
Monday Mania--Query Letter - Critique Archive #56 * * *One of our readers has submitted a query for critique. Please offer only constructive comments. * * * Dear XXXX, We usually t...1 week ago
-
#244 - Dear QueryShark Winston Smith has been a foolish man, and on Christmas Day of 2012, it's going to cost him his life. This is a great opening line. D...1 week ago
-
A Film Ian Likes: The Princess Bride - The Princess Bride This is an almost perfectly structured film: it starts quietly, introducing characters and situations one by one and then building the s...1 week ago
-
Meanjin Story, Isobelle Carmody on "Dreaming of Djinn" and Current Reads - *Meanjin Story, Isobelle Carmody on Dreaming of Djinn, and Current Reads* The renown Isobelle Carmody was the guest on Monday's *Meanjin* blog post and she...1 week ago
-
New Release: Hal Spacejock 6 Safe Art - It's been a while, but I've been spending my time writing novels instead of blog posts. Since the last update I've released Hal Junior 3: The Gyris Mission...2 weeks ago
-
How Story Can Help Stressed-Out Staff - Story has a role to play in every aspect of our lives. Some years ago I presented a storytelling program for technical and support staff at a major hospita...2 weeks ago
-
Commentaries on the Golden Dawn Flying Rolls by the Golden Dawn Community - And the big news of the day is the announcement of the release of Commentaries on the Golden Dawn Flying Rolls. (Info here). For those who do not know, the...2 weeks ago
-
A new show in rehearsal, and a bit at the Vault Cabaret - Yes, our exciting new show, Comets and Chocolates, is in rehearsals! It stars the multi-talented Greg Shand, and has gorgeous music by Houston Dunleavy an...2 weeks ago
-
The Skill List Project: Exposition Execution - This is another post in The Skill List Project: an attempt to list all the skills involved in writing and selling fiction, particularly science fiction and...2 weeks ago
-
Still life with nasturtiums (86) - Another still life - this time of a bowl of nasturtiums. This is a very sentimental painting for me because I painted it while in the company of my dear f...2 weeks ago
-
What to write when you can’t write - Okay so some of you may have come here expecting me to talk about climbing out of writer’s block hell, but that’s not what this is about. I’m not sure I ev...3 weeks ago
-
Daisy’s wedding - We have a contractor at work who is getting married on Saturday, registry office as her ‘real’ wedding will be in Europe next year wit her family. We are g...3 weeks ago
-
Margo’s Aurealis Night! - It was a great night at the Aurealis Awards – I was on the return trip from two weeks travelling north doing Song of the Slums school visits, but even my d...4 weeks ago
-
KSP WRITERS’ CENTRE 2013/14 RESIDENCY PROGRAM - KSP WRITERS’ CENTRE 2013/14 RESIDENCY PROGRAM Applications closing soon 2013 Young Writers-In-Residence Applications for 2013 Young Writer-In-Residence...5 weeks ago
-
-
Update from Rio - *The renovated staircase leading up to the Buddha Vihara* Hi Friends, Namo Buddhaya, I have been in Rio De Janeiro staying at the Rio Buddha Vihara for th...5 weeks ago
-
Book Review: Marlo Can Fly, by Robert Vescio - Marlo Can Fly is a new Australian picture book by Robert Vescio, illustrated by Sandra Temple and published by Wombat Books in 2013. Marlo Can Fly is a lo...5 weeks ago
-
Editing today - I was asked for advice on becoming a book editor, and of course, as a young friend calls me, I'm the dreamkiller. I go around being "realistic" and/or "neg...1 month ago
-
Book Promotion Tip of the Week #12: Get Lucky, and Live with the Guilt - To Warn Prospective Buyers or Not To Warn: That Is the Question This week, the outstanding American novelist Claire Messud published her fourth book of fic...1 month ago
-
The Ursuline Experience of Slavery - A zealous commitment to social justice and human rights has not always been an attribute of the Catholic Church. Although Saint Thomas Aquinas wrote in th...1 month ago
-
Edward de Grazia, the lawyer who fought book censorship & wrote Girls Lean Back Everywhere - In a 2008 post about Banned Books Week, I recommended an excellent 1992 book about literary censorship and obscenity prosecutions in the United States, Edw...1 month ago
-
Proceeding as per usual and nothing to report - Time travel would mess up nearly everything. Without strict controls there could easily arise a situation where the natural progression of things precludes...2 months ago
-
Finalist BBC Wildlife Artist of the year 2013 - I am delighted to be able to report that I have had three of my paintings accepted into the finals of the BBC Wildlife Artist of the year competition 2013....2 months ago
-
Are you a Freelance Copy Editor? - Are you an experienced freelance copy editor who has an interest in working with self-publishing writers? We (BubbleCow) are currently looking for two co...2 months ago
-
One Publisher’s Journey - Guest Post by Benjamin LeRoy I’ve been a steady lurker on the Absolute Write forums since 2005. Every now and again I jump into a thread if I feel like the...2 months ago
-
-
This Blog has moved to www.gailgaymermaritn.com - This blog has been moved to www.gailgaymermartin.com Please visit my Writing Fiction Blog there filled with the same comprehensive information and many mo...3 months ago
-
So much happening, so little blogging... - I called my blog The Best Audience Award because, as well as feeling "not good enough" as a maker (writer, photographer, whatever I might otherwise post) I...3 months ago
-
Query letter #10: Mitch H - A monastic trained orphan with a talent for Sorcery, Caldan's entire world dissolves when he learns his family was murdered, almost kills his friend's bro...3 months ago
-
Can you use my Word book cover design? - Using word to design a book cover Microsoft Word is not appropriate software to use for an actual book cover design, however it is great if you've cre...4 months ago
-
Incredible article on Photographer Joel Grimes - I was having a chuckle at the first two minutes of this video and got to thinking how similar it sounded to me growing up. From pulling things apart and no...4 months ago
-
Tinye gifte for Valentynes Daye: Amour Ys Lyke a Potel of Wyne - O gentil rederes of my blog, how grete the peynes smerte that come to me whanne Ich thinken upon my lakke of updatinge. Swich grete busynesse hath fallen u...4 months ago
-
-
Just writing & associated thoughts - What sets me writing? I know people ask this of writers & now I'm asking it of myself. I'm pulling out of a long de-motivated block of time and getting s...4 months ago
-
Tarnished Crown #1 is done - sort of! - Insofar as it has a beginning, a middle and an end. So now people with less mushy brains than me can rip it to shreds so I can rewrite it and make it bette...5 months ago
-
Edward IV's marriage to Elizabeth Woodville - An evil fairy almost made me include 'supposed', 'bigamous' or 'purported' in that title. After all, in a world where at least one author has put Richard I...5 months ago
-
Messenger Feast - * Kivgiqsuat, Messenger Feast, Inuit of Alaska* *"After the separation of the summer months the villagers begin socializing with other village groups. Durin...5 months ago
-
Defining the Target Audience for Your Fiction - So you’re writing a novel and your critique buddies want to know who your “target audience” is. What do you tell them? Nee posted this question on my “Ask ...6 months ago
-
"It is only a Black Dog, I am a wolf" - Hail, I have not been writing much lately, now I will try to write about why I can't write, and why I actually think it is possible I am going a little b...9 months ago
-
Rev. Johann Polhemus' deadly scrapes - *© Christy K Robinson* He survived war, bubonic plague, trans-Atlantic travel, 20 years in the equatorial rainforest, two pirate attacks, two years' separa...9 months ago
Favourite Sites
- Bren McDibble
- Celestine Lyons
- Guy Gavriel Kay
- Hal Spacejock (Simon Haynes)
- Jacqueline Carey
- Jennifer Fallon
- Jessica Vivien
- Joel Fagin
- Juliet Marillier
- KA Bedford
- Karen Miller
- KSP Writers Centre
- Lynn Flewelling
- Marianne de Pierres
- Phill Berrie
- Ryan Flavell
- Satima's Professional Editing Services
- SF Novelists' Blog
- SF Signal
- Shane Jiraiya Cummings
- Society of Editors, WA
- Stephen Thompson
- The Specusphere
- Yellow wallpaper
Sunday, 9 June 2013
Out of the madhouse
A friend recently posted on Facebook –‘Been looking for freelance writing/proof-reading work in
London. Amazed at how many jobs are advertised as “unpaid but providing a wealth of experience and a well-known name for your CV”. Next time I need the plumber, I'll tell him I won't pay for him to fix my tap but he can certainly list my name on his website. Actually, I might just try that at the supermarket.’
I know how my friend feels. I get the odd query from a first-time author with inflated expectations, asking if they can pay me a percentage of the book’s take instead of paying up front. No way José – I know how much most self-published authors make, and that’s 'very little'. If you self-publish, you must be prepared to do it for love. Even authors published by the big houses might not make a living wage – it’s said that the average author in Australia earns less from writing than they would on the dole. And given the tough economic times and the state of flux of the publishing industry, it's going to get worse.
It’s not just writers and editors who suffer, either. In all the arts, there have always been more good people than available jobs. It's more apparent than ever today, and part of the problem, I think, is that the tertiary institutions are turning out too many graduates. These graduates have to create their own employment, and usually their projects can’t be realised without some kind of subsidy. Or they work in community theatre for nothing. Or they self-publish books. As one of my writerly friends puts it ‘Centrelink’ (Australia’s social security department) ‘is the biggest patron of the arts since the de Medicis’.
As long as there is cheap or free labour around the arts will remain a buyers' market, and inevitably, this 'amateurisation' of the arts will continue. Yet if you are an artist of any ilk, you are probably also a rugged individualist. An office job would drive you insane. Routine bores you, and lack of a creative outlet can make you severely depressed. Furthermore, trying to be creative while selling your soul to the system is a sorry task.
It’s a conundrum, and I don’t think it’s a new one. As Friedrich Nietzsche once wrote: ‘The individual has always had to struggle to keep from being overwhelmed by the collective. If you choose to fight, you will be lonely often, and sometimes frightened ... but no price is too high to pay for the privilege of owning yourself.’
Nietzche is also reported as saying And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music. May there always be those few of us who do hear the music, either as creators or consumers of the arts. We might be thought insane – but I do believe we keep the rest of society out of the madhouse.
| Reactions: |
Tuesday, 4 June 2013
Dance like nobody's looking
I recently
attended my very first Middle Eastern Dance Festival. Middle Eastern dance,
especially belly dancing, is very popular in Australia, and several states hold
annual festivals. The Western Australian one, founded by Keti Sharif enjoys national renoun.
Several hundred participants turned up at the Juan Rando Dance Academy in
Subiaco to attend
workshops for four full days, with four different classes running
simultaneously. There were two evening performances and a one-day market as
well.
![]() |
| Barbara Wolfencamp (Zahraa) |
Guests-of-honour
were Ozgen
from Turkey and
Tamalyn Dallal from the USA. I was fortunate enough to get places in workshops with both these
fine artists, as well as those with Australian doyennes Belyssa and Zahraa (Barbara Wolfcamp). It was a fitness trial for me as it’s
been many years since I’ve danced for four hours a day, but although I was
tired and sore I managed all the classes and did not notice my concentration
slipping until the last couple, when I felt I was struggling a bit to stay
focused and pick up unfamiliar material.
A quick
rundown of the workshops' content – on Thursday I did Barbara's class on various Persian styles of dance. I
especially loved the classical section as the movements are smooth and graceful
and the music has varying time signatures. (Here in Perth the Egyptian style
predominates and most of the music is in 4/4 time.) After lunch I took Ethnic
Potpourri with Tamalyn, who taught us moves from Ethiopia and Zanzibar,
among other places. Tamalyn has a wide knowledge of various folkloric
styles, as has Belyssa, whose class I attended on Friday morning. She taught us
moves from Morocco, Nubia, and the desert Bedouin tribes, some of which are very
earthy. Very earthy indeed, in fact.
Then it was back to
Tamalyn for an improvisation class using tools such as 'writing' our
names with various body parts and drawing on the four elements together with
the idea of 'consistency', thinking of substances such as honey and dark
chocolate! It took me right back to my days at WAAPA, back in
the eighties, when I did a class of that kind several times a week.
![]() |
| Ozgen |
I had a day off on Saturday, having
realised before I registered that at my age I was probably not going to be able
to sustain four days of classes, and I returned on Sunday with energy renewed,
which was just as well because that was when I had my only workshop with the
indefatigable Ozgen! Once again I was reminded of my days at WAAPA, but this
time it was character classes that were recapped. Ozgen concentrated on Turkish
Romany dances, and some of the steps are very tricky. The steps themselves
would not be too hard, studied one at a time – most of them can be a seen as
variants of what in ballet is called a pas de bourrée - three steps that travel
in any direction. However, the time signatures of 9/8 and 5/4 were very
challenging, and there was a lot of material to cover.
![]() |
| Tamalyn Dallal |
My mind had become a tad
fuzzy by the time the last class rolled around, this one on Orchestral Taqsim
with Tamalyn. She is very knowledgeable about Middle Eastern music and
instruments, so this class was a fast study in music as well as dance.
Overall, the WAMED festival broadened
my knowledge and understanding of Middle-Eastern and North African ethnic dance,
as opposed to the more commercial ‘belly dance’ which owes as much to Hollywood
as to the Middle East. I hope I will still be fit enough to do it again next
year. I was very pleased to see that there were at least a dozen women of about
my own age, proving that dance is not just for the young and beautiful!
| Reactions: |
Monday, 20 May 2013
Book Review: The First Law trilogy by Joe Abercrombie
The First Law Trilogy by Joe AbercrombieMy rating: 5 of 5 stars
The Blade Itself 2006 IBSN 9780575079793
Before They Are Hanged 2007 ISBN 9780575082014
The Last Argument of Kings 2008 ISBN 9780575077898
All published by Gollancz
This review originally appeared on The Specusphere, a now-defunct webzine, in 2008
In The First Law, UK fantasy writer Joe Abercrombie has produced one of the most impressive first trilogies ever to hit the market. It is remarkable not only because of its brilliantly complex plot and characters, but also because of its fearless investigation of the dark labyrinths of the human condition. Here be no dragons, and hardly a mage or a McGuffin is in sight, either. Instead, we have a blood, sweat and tears tale of the first water, incorporating, as the author puts in on his web site 'all the grit, and cruelty, and humour of real life'. Good and evil depend on who’s talking. Good actions are not necessarily rewarded and neither do the bad guys always get their comeuppance. In fact, there are no real 'bad guys': rather, we see the skilful and unskilful behaviours of which we’re all capable held up to us as in a dark mirror of gut-wrenching veracity.
Abercrombie doesn’t write dialogue: he writes characters, and they speak to us. They speak of our own foibles and failures, sins and successes. What’s more, he writes fight scenes where valour and chivalry are in very short supply and love scenes that are heart-aching because we see all too clearly that nothing, not even the flawed emotion we call love, can save us from our own blindness. Technically, Abercrombie achieves this through his deep understanding of the close third point-of-view. Immersion in Abercrombie’s invented world is not optional.
The trilogy is centred on a man the author calls the 'thinking man's barbarian', one Logen Ninefingers. For the most part, Logen does what he has to do and does it well, with as much—and as little—exertion as is needed. Yet in battle he can be a berserker, when his alter ego, The Bloody Nine, takes over and he is as likely to slaughter friend as foe. The story is not only Logen’s: other point-of-view characters include Collum West, a career soldier; his friend, the spoilt aristocrat Jezal Luthar; Glokta, a war hero turned Inquisitor – and Ferro, a runaway slave whose only interest in life is vengeance. Each one has friends and foes and as they interact with each other’s milieus we begin to understand the politics of their world as well as their interpersonal relationships. We meet Bayaz, First of the Magi, and his hapless assistant Quai; Ardee West, Collum’s wayward sister; Brother Longfoot, who will steer a team led by Bayaz on a quest to find the magic stone that will destroy all the enemies of Bayaz, and an assortment of self-seeking politicians and military personnel. But be warned: none of these apparently stock characters turns out to be what they appear.
In book one, The Blade Itself, war is in the air and many look to the return of Bayaz to save them. We see Bayaz gathering his team together and realise the conflicting interests his presence arouses. Book two, Before They Are Hanged, shows the struggle of the poorly-trained and equipped Midderlands army against the Northmen who have invaded their province of Angland. It also deals with the quest of Bayaz, and has the most surprising ending that any quest story could possibly have. Book three, The Last Argument of Kings, deals with the war’s climax: an army of religious fanatics led by flesh-eating priests is attacking Midderlands, but their army is still in Angland and the king, newly elected and disastrously married, must hold out until the fighting force returns.
And 'The First Law'? The expression refers to the injunction against using magic from the Other Side. What are the consequences when that law is broken?
Abercrombie can only be compared to George R.R. Martin, but he is, thankfully, rather more succinct, having managed to squash his story into the customary three volumes. And you must read all three books, in order, as close together as possible, if you are to get the most out of this epic. Although each book is well-rounded and skilfully crafted, none truly stands alone. It matters not: once you embark on this tale you will not want it to end.
If you like your fantasy harsh and gritty, can stand a great deal of death and destruction, and if you don’t want everything tied up in neat packages with 'happy ever after' stamped on them, you must read this trilogy.
View all my Goodreads reviews
| Reactions: |
Tuesday, 14 May 2013
Book review: Scary Kisses by Liz Grzyb (ed.)
More Scary Kisses by Liz GrzybMy rating: 4 of 5 stars
I love this anthology. It is, I think, the best antho so far from Liz Grzyb and Ticonderoga. The stories are varied, so there will be some to suit any taste, and they are all well-written and well-edited. Despite the title and the cover, the stories are not all romantic and in several, the romance is implied rather than explicit.
The story I loved best was The Last Gig of Jimmy Rucker, by Martin Livings and Talie Helene: in fact, I would go so far as to say this is one of the best short stories I've ever read, and I have it filed away in my memory alongside The Monkey's Paw and The Nine Billion Names of God.
Felicity Dowker's Berries and Incense is another worthy of note, along with Jason Nahrung's Resurrection in Red and Nicole R. Murphy's The Protector's Last Mission. But your mileage may vary - as I've already said, there is something here to suit any taste.
Thoroughly recommended!
View all my Goodreads reviews
| Reactions: |
Saturday, 4 May 2013
Conflux 9 - Natcon 52
I don’t
often get to interstate conventions because of the high cost of flying across
this huge country of ours. We have two or three enjoyable conventions here in Perth
most years, and they provide a lot of fun for locals and even a few interstate adventurers.
But there’s something about a national convention that makes the interstate
trip well worthwhile if cash can be found for plane fares and accommodation.
The convention itself is not expensive. All the work is done by volunteers, so
the subscriptions of attendees can go toward expenses, including paying the airfares
of the international and interstate guests-of-honour.
![]() |
| Nalo Hopkinson |
This year,
those guests-of-honour were great fun to have around. Jamaican-born Nalo Hopkinson, author of The New Moon’s Arms, gave us a taste of
a different culture as she sat on panels, knitting when she wasn’t talking and
dropping in salient comments on topics as wide reaching as cultural appropriation
in speculative fiction and ‘the secret lives of authors’ – i.e. what authors do
in their spare time. The other overseas guest, Marc Gascoigne of Angry Robot Press, was
a mine of information for would-be authors, as were local guests-of-honour KarenMiller and Kaaron Warren. Fan guest-of-honour was Rose Mitchell, who has
held a range of senior positions in various clubs or on convention committees.
She was Co-chair of Aussiecon 4, the world science fiction convention held in
Melbourne in 2010, which was my first – and probably only! – Worldcon. It was a wonderful experience.
Other local
guests included some of my favourite wordsmiths. Glenda Larke, recently
returned to live in Perth after many years of domicile in Malaysia, not only spoke
knowledgeably on a variety of panel topics, but gave us a lovely kaffeeklatch,
generously sharing her writing expertise, as did Karen Miller, Trudi Canavan, Kate
Forsyth, Keri Archer and many other local authors. Glenda announced news of her latest sale - I can’t wait to read book one of this
exciting new trilogy!
We had
several book launches, too – Nicole Murphy launched her crowd-funded mentorship’s
anthology In Fabula Divino (some
great new talent there!) and Jason Fischer launched his latest, Quiver. We also got a peek at Rob Hood’s
new opus, Fragments of a broken Land-Valarl
Undead: the title alone sounds terrifying! The Canberra Science Fiction
Group also launched its latest anthology, Next,
and Tom Dullemond and Mike McRae introduced us to The Machine who was also a Boy.
In lieu of
a Guest-of-Honour Speech, Karen Miller gave us a magnificent slideshow presentation
on her
recent research tour of Europe. Things that interest everyday tourists
were not Karen’s quarry: rather, she was after shots of the quirky, the
dangerous, the places that stimulate the imagination. She felt, after the tour,
much more confident to begin her project because she had immersed herself in
its settings.
![]() |
| Karen Miller |
![]() |
| Patty Jansen |
I took part
in three panels. The first was at 10.00 PM on Thursday night. I wasn’t going to
participate because I fully expected to be brain dead after the flight over
from Perth, but to my surprise I was wide awake and rearing to go. I’m glad I
went on the panel because we had a most interesting discussion about the value
of editing for self-published authors. Patty Jansen
pointed out that editing is such a big expense that someone hoping to make a living
from self-published works would find having every story professionally edited
too much of a financial burden. She has overcome the problem by relying on a
corps of knowledgeable beta readers who serve as an editing panel, and this
works for her as a good compromise. The other panellists (Abigail Nathan, Ian Nichols and I) agreed, though, that many
self-published authors do not have Patty’s experience and neither do they have
a band of well-read, well-educated beta readers who have some knowledge of the
editing process – hence the terribly low standard of some of the material that
turns up on Amazon and other sales sites.
My second
panel was less contentious, and it introduced me to some new colleagues. It was
a big panel – Phill Berrie
is a long-time crit buddy (and a brilliant continuity editor!), but Helen Stubbs, ZenaShapter, LeifeShallcross, Tracey O’Hara and I did not know each other. That’s one of the great things about
conventions – you get to meet lots of nice new friends! We had a productive
discussion on the value of writing communities – I.E. critique groups both
online and in person. There is little doubt that writers, especially when they
first start out, derive enormous benefit from these. Even published authors
usually have a group of trusted readers to show their MSS to. We swapped
experiences and were able to make up a list of writers centres and online
groups for new writers to check out.
My third
panel was about the place of a mentor in one’s writing career. My fellow
panellists were Valerie Parv, Joanne Anderton, Kaaron Warren, Jodi Cleghorn, and Kimberley Gaal.
We had all had experiences of mentoring or being mentored – some of us both –
so the discussion centred on reminiscences and lessons learned from each side
of the process!
There was
much interest in self-publishing. I was on a panel on the topic (see above) and
another one that impressed numbered Felicity Pulman among
the panellists. She generously gave out some printed notes she’d put together
to help intending self-publishers. As I am considering joining those ranks
myself, I was deeply grateful to Felicity for sharing her experiences with us.
Perhaps the
most fun I had at Conflux 9 was on the Saturday night, when the masquerade is
traditionally held. This year’s theme was Steampunk, and there was indeed a
surprising number of top-hatted gentlemen and bustled ladies around the Rydges
Hotel in Canberra Avenue! However, I didn’t go to the masquerade. Instead, I
opted for the other activity – the Romance Gauntlet
This is apparently
an annual event, and what fun it was! It seems that Canberra is not only well-served
for SF authors and fans, but for those of the Romance persuasion as well, and
every year at Conflux they hold a duel of panels. Craig Cormick skilfully wrangled
the contestants in a blow-by-blow steaming reading romp. Panellists included
Valerie Parv, KateForsyth, Jane Virgo, Leife Shallcross,
Phill Berrie, Ross Hamilton,
Robert Porteous,
Shauna O’Meara, Sam Phillips and Simon Petrie.
I’m not sure who won because everyone got a prize, including members of the
audience – we had all contributed to a re-telling of the story of the Three
Little Pigs and a list of delicate, sensitive ways (Ha!) to describe the sex
act.
Other highlights included the various awards – the Ditmars (see list of winners here) the Norma K. Hemming Award (Margo Lanagan) and the A. Bertam Chandler Award
(Russell B. Farr) I was delighted that my good friend Carol Ryles was placed in the
Conflux Short Story Competition and had her piece, The Silence of Clockwork, featured in the printed program.
Of course, conventions and conferences are never long
enough. I barely had chance to catch up with Tim Roberts,
Gillian Polack and Deborah Green, among others.
![]() |
| Satima, Carol and Helen - this was taken at Swancon in 2010 |
The choice
of venue can hardly be faulted. Rydges Capitol Hill has spacious public areas,
a well-serviced and inexpensive restaurant, and free Wi-Fi for guests and pleasingly
quiet rooms. My room-mates, Helen Venn and Carol Ryles, were a joy to share
with. If I have a grizzle at all it is that the room was too small and badly
designed. Why any room should need two queen sized beds boggles the imagination
(let's not go there) and they’d crammed a pallet in as well. Surely a hotel of
that standing should have a room with a double and two single beds, or three
single beds?
My only
disappointment was the printed program, which did not include the usual potted
bios of panellists. There is a partial list on the website, but I always find
it very handy to be able to look in the program book to find out more about
panellists I’m on with or who have said something really interesting that I
want to follow up by checking out their blogs or websites. As it is, I have no
idea who some of the panellists were.
That’s a
small grizzle, for the con was well organised and efficiently run by DonnaMarie Hanson and Nicole Murphy.
They are to be congratulated
on putting together a winning team and getting Conflux 9 to the finishing line
with flying colours. Bravo!
| Reactions: |
Tuesday, 30 April 2013
Meet one of my characters
I've written a post about one of my nastiest characters as a guest on Joanna Fay's blog:
http://joannafay.me/2013/04/24/character-column-meet-satima-flavell-and-nustofer/
Booze is not Nustofer's greatest weakness, but this 13th century picture from Wikimedia Commons sums up his sneaky character very well!
Thanks to Joanna for inviting me to guest on her blog. You can find info on Joanna and her books there, too - her second one, Reunion, has recently been published by Musa.
| Reactions: |
Sunday, 14 April 2013
Book review: Eagle of the East by LS Lawrence

Eagle of the East by LS Lawrence
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
This review first appeared on the now defunct site The Specusphere in July 2007.
L.S. Lawrence is a nom de plume for one of Aussie fandom's best regarded medieval historians, whose earlier work in the realm of YA fantasy will be familiar to most Speculative Fiction buffs in this country. Out of respect for the wishes of his agent and publisher, his name has been held back from this review. He is, of course, in good company: several other writers use different names for different genres. One who comes to mind is Stateside romance and specfic author Jayne Ann Krentz, who writes under no fewer than seven discrete names!
Based on an intriguing historical vignette, Eagle of the East speculates on the destiny of 10,000 Roman prisoners, who, according to Pliny, were commandeered by the victors to protect the eastern frontier of the Parthian Empire after Crassus's ill-fated expedition in 53 BC. These prisoners, apparently serving as mercenaries, would probably have met the conquering Han Chinese, thus becoming, perhaps, the first westerners to meet people of Chinese ethnicity. From this sketchy episode, Lawrence has developed a richly imagined tapestry of the meeting of three peoples: the Romans, the Parthians and the nomadic tribes of the Central Asian Steppes.
Eagle of the East is largely a coming-of-age novel in which Ardavan, a boy with no father, nevertheless finds his place in the world. Told from the point-of-view of a half-Roman youth of Parthia, the story weaves together themes of jealousy, suspicion, mistrust and murder, giving plenty of opportunity for sword-fighting scenes as well as episodes from the rough-and-tumble life of an army on the march.
While spec-fic fans will miss the magical element that characterized this author's earlier works, young men from eleven to eleventy-one will enjoy Ardavan's adventures. Right from the first chapter, when the youngster defeats a much bigger opponent by squeezing his testicles, we are right in the thick of a world where sharp eyes and ears, together with well-practised self defence skills, are pre-requisites for survival. Along the way, we experience with Ardavan the essentials of Roman fighting techniques, taste the elegant precision of Parthian archery and become embroiled in political and military manoeuvrings and skulduggery.
So many excellent books have been written for young women in recent years that it is a refreshing change to read such a boldly masculine story. Not that the book entirely lacks feminine interest, for the nomadic warrior chieftain Shara will quickly win the heart of any girl who yearns for heroines who are not the usual run-of-the-mill princesses and slave girls so beloved of spec-fic and hist-fic writers. Shara can shoot arrows from horseback faster than I can eat cashew nuts – and that without reins or stirrups. And she gets her man in the end, too, although it must be admitted that romance is only a peripheral element of this unashamedly blokey book.
My only grizzle is that in places I would have liked more dialogue. The narrative is excellent and always in character, but even in the heat of a fight, surely the antagonists would engage in a little light conversation about each other's ancestry and personal habits?
Lawrence has written a story in the tradition of such luminaries of the genre as Rosemary Sutcliff and Mary Stewart. His work, however, is fresh and exciting, being presented in a way that will appeal to today's more streetwise youngsters. Don't tell, them for heaven's sake, that they will be unable to avoid learning a bit of history at the same time. Who knows? Some young men might even find they like it and look for more. Let's hope Lawrence's fertile imagination will come up with a sequel. I, for one, would love to speculate on what those Romans did when they settled in Han country!
View all my Goodreads reviews
| Reactions: |
Sunday, 7 April 2013
Book review - Best Served Cold by Joe Abercrombie
This is another review that first appeared on the late lamented Specusphere, this one in cahoots with my old crit buddy Ian Banks - not the Scottish one, the Western Australian one who only has one i.
Best Served Cold takes place a few years after Abercrombie’s
breakout trilogy, The First Law. It involves a few subsidiary characters
and features one or two memorable cameos from people we got to know in that
series, but it is a stand-alone volume.
It is the story of Monza Murcatto, a mercenary
captain who has schemed her way to the top of her profession and into the
confidences of her employer, Duke Orso, who has been using her to expand his
interests. Unfortunately, though, she appears to be too popular with the masses
for Orso, so he arranges to have her and her brother murdered. Monza survives
the murder attempt and plots avenge her brother’s death by killing all the men
who took part.
She begins by recruiting agents to her cause and
assembles a wild bunch indeed. There’s the disaffected Northman, Caul Shivers,
who just wants to be better than he is; Friendly, the convict savant who loves
numbers; Morveer the poisoner and his assistant, Day; and several other
colourful and well-drawn characters.
The story doesn’t follow the epic pattern
established in The First Law but plays out more like a western, with Monza
assembling her team, seeking out information, uncovering a wider scheme in
which her revenge is only one factor in a greater fight, and then building to a
bloody and unbelievable climax in which it seems that she may have taken on a
job that even her ruthless nature cannot stomach.
This is great read: it sprawls across countries and
cultures, with memorable characters and some great scenes and, as expected with
Abercrombie, fantastic dialogue. He also raises a lot of questions about the
nature of revenge and of nobility which make this quite a meaty story. In many
ways it’s an easier read than the First Law Trilogy, because there in only one
plot and one set of characters who interact in various ways as they swap
allegiance or interact with minor characters.
All this more than makes up for the shortcomings of
this novel, such as they are. Fans of The First Law will enjoy meeting
some old friends and revisiting some places around the Circle and Azure Seas.
Mention is made of the greater, shadowy conflict that served as the basis for
the denouement of that earlier series, but newcomers may find it all a little
confusing when the story delves into that realm if they haven’t either read the
earlier books. Also, some of the scenes seem a little too over-the-top when you
play them on the large-screen television inside your skull. There is one in
which the team has to cross from one tall building to another by hitching along
by clinging under a rope with hands and feet. The resultant misadventures, both
real and imagined, would make either a terrifying dark horror movie or a
screamingly funny slapstick, depending on how it was played.
Abercrombie has also, perhaps, gone overboard with the sex, violence and bad language: more than one reader has given up on Best Served Cold because of these. In the earlier trilogy these elements fitted seamlessly into the plot: in this book they sometimes appear gratuitous. It could well be, also, that some readers will be annoyed by the little tricks Abercrombie plays, especially in the last third of the book. He leads us to believe certain things are happening or have happened, and then a few chapters later more or less says 'Hah! Fooled you!'
Abercrombie has also, perhaps, gone overboard with the sex, violence and bad language: more than one reader has given up on Best Served Cold because of these. In the earlier trilogy these elements fitted seamlessly into the plot: in this book they sometimes appear gratuitous. It could well be, also, that some readers will be annoyed by the little tricks Abercrombie plays, especially in the last third of the book. He leads us to believe certain things are happening or have happened, and then a few chapters later more or less says 'Hah! Fooled you!'
But these are small flaws when put against what is
on offer here: a revenge thriller with great characters and snarky dialogue. If
you enjoyed Abercrombie’s earlier books, you will find much to savour here. If
you’ve also enjoyed The Good, the Bad And the Ugly and any kind of
vengeance story in which the payoff may be more than the characters are willing
to come at, you will have a ball with this.
| Reactions: |
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)









