About Me
- Satima Flavell
- Perth, Western Australia, Australia
- I am based in Perth, Western Australia. You might enjoy my books - The Dagger of Dresnia, the first book of the Talismans Trilogy, is available at all good online book shops as is Book two, The Cloak of Challiver. Book three, The Seer of Syland, is in preparation. I trained in piano and singing at the NSW Conservatorium of Music. I also trained in dance (Scully-Borovansky, WAAPA) and drama (NIDA). Since 1987 I have been writing reviews of performances in all genres for a variety of publications, including Music Maker, ArtsWest, Dance Australia, The Australian and others. Now semi-retired, I still write occasionally for the ArtsHub website.
My books
The first two books of my trilogy, The Talismans, (The Dagger of Dresnia, and book two, The Cloak of Challiver) are available in e-book format from Smashwords, Amazon and other online sellers. Book three of the trilogy, The Seer of Syland, is in preparation.I also have a short story, 'La Belle Dame', in print - see Mythic Resonance below - as well as well as a few poems in various places.
The best way to contact me is via Facebook at https://www.facebook.com/satimaflavell
Buy The Talismans
The first two books of The Talismans trilogy were published by Satalyte Publications, which, sadly, has gone out of business. However, The Dagger of Dresnia and The Cloak of Challiver are available as ebooks on the usual book-selling websites, and book three, The Seer of Syland, is in preparation.
The easiest way to contact me is via Facebook.
The Dagger of Dresnia
The Cloak of Challiver, Book two of The Talismans
Mythic Resonance
Mythic Resonance is an excellent anthology that includes my short story 'La Belle Dame', together with great stories from Alan Baxter, Donna Maree Hanson, Sue Burstynski, Nike Sulway and nine more fantastic authors! Just $US3.99 from Amazon.
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Monday 5 May 2014
Book review: Winterbirth by Brian Ruckley
Monday, May 05, 2014 |
Posted by
Satima Flavell
Winterbirth by Brian Ruckley
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
This review originally appeared on the now defunct webzine, The Specusphere, in January 2008. I wrote it in conjunction with my friend Joan Malpass.
Ruckley's debut novel tells of war and violence set in a land torn apart by the breaking of a truce. If Ruckley is to be believed, the greatest tales are written in blood. In this first book of a trilogy, he sets out to demonstrate that through lavishly described hard and heavy action set in a godless world of ice and blood. The adventure begins when the Gods have made the world and created the five races. Now the gods are absent as the third age arrives, bringing chaos. The struggle lies between those who each believe their way is right: the way in which all wars begin.
The weapons are age old, the skills even older. Swift and violent battles rage and always the blood runs. Those few who seek peace are lost in the chaos as they strive for a different future. Action drives the tale as the battles of the Thanes of the True Bloods are played out. Their cruelty, passion and blood lust are paralleled by the quest of one man seeking to ‘activate in full the terrible power he senses in himself’. And all will tremble if he should succeed.
Winterbirth might appeal to a wider audience if one or more of the female characters had been developed. Such inclusion as there is of the softer side of life is little more than token. There are three potentially interesting female characters - Anyara, Yvane and Ess'yr. (As an aside, why on earth do so many fantasy writers think apostrophes essential to exotic names?) If one of them had been used to provide more of a foil for the blood and thunder, it might have been easier to cope with the continual marching-fighting-marching-fighting. As it stands, Winterbirth comes across as a rather confusing story about a great many macho men dumped in a wild setting and left to fight it out. This is a book with huge cast of characters, but sadly, none is sufficiently clearly drawn to make us interested in his or her personal journey. Fantasy's greatest strength, perhaps, lies in its capacity to depict an outer journey as a cipher for the inner one, and Winterbirth didn't do that, at least, not for these reviewers.
But there's no denying that Winterbirth has the capacity to haunt in shades of red. For those who like their heroic battles well steeped in blood and action this could well be the start of a satisfying journey.
Bloodheir, The Godless World Part Two and Fall of Thanes, The Godless World Part Three are also available on Amazon. For more about Brian Ruckley and his work, check out http://www.brianruckley.com
View all my Goodreads reviews
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
This review originally appeared on the now defunct webzine, The Specusphere, in January 2008. I wrote it in conjunction with my friend Joan Malpass.
Ruckley's debut novel tells of war and violence set in a land torn apart by the breaking of a truce. If Ruckley is to be believed, the greatest tales are written in blood. In this first book of a trilogy, he sets out to demonstrate that through lavishly described hard and heavy action set in a godless world of ice and blood. The adventure begins when the Gods have made the world and created the five races. Now the gods are absent as the third age arrives, bringing chaos. The struggle lies between those who each believe their way is right: the way in which all wars begin.
The weapons are age old, the skills even older. Swift and violent battles rage and always the blood runs. Those few who seek peace are lost in the chaos as they strive for a different future. Action drives the tale as the battles of the Thanes of the True Bloods are played out. Their cruelty, passion and blood lust are paralleled by the quest of one man seeking to ‘activate in full the terrible power he senses in himself’. And all will tremble if he should succeed.
Winterbirth might appeal to a wider audience if one or more of the female characters had been developed. Such inclusion as there is of the softer side of life is little more than token. There are three potentially interesting female characters - Anyara, Yvane and Ess'yr. (As an aside, why on earth do so many fantasy writers think apostrophes essential to exotic names?) If one of them had been used to provide more of a foil for the blood and thunder, it might have been easier to cope with the continual marching-fighting-marching-fighting. As it stands, Winterbirth comes across as a rather confusing story about a great many macho men dumped in a wild setting and left to fight it out. This is a book with huge cast of characters, but sadly, none is sufficiently clearly drawn to make us interested in his or her personal journey. Fantasy's greatest strength, perhaps, lies in its capacity to depict an outer journey as a cipher for the inner one, and Winterbirth didn't do that, at least, not for these reviewers.
But there's no denying that Winterbirth has the capacity to haunt in shades of red. For those who like their heroic battles well steeped in blood and action this could well be the start of a satisfying journey.
Bloodheir, The Godless World Part Two and Fall of Thanes, The Godless World Part Three are also available on Amazon. For more about Brian Ruckley and his work, check out http://www.brianruckley.com
View all my Goodreads reviews
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