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- Satima Flavell
- Perth, Western Australia, Australia
- I am based in Perth, Western Australia. You might enjoy my books - The Dagger of Dresnia, the first book of the Talismans Trilogy, is available at all good online book shops as is Book two, The Cloak of Challiver. Book three, The Seer of Syland, is in preparation. I trained in piano and singing at the NSW Conservatorium of Music. I also trained in dance (Scully-Borovansky, WAAPA) and drama (NIDA). Since 1987 I have been writing reviews of performances in all genres for a variety of publications, including Music Maker, ArtsWest, Dance Australia, The Australian and others. Now semi-retired, I still write occasionally for the ArtsHub website.
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Monday, 27 August 2018
Monday, August 27, 2018 |
Posted by
Satima Flavell
Here, as promised, is The Cloak of Challiver, Chapter 2
Chapter 2
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Chapter 2
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It had been a week since the birthday
celebrations, and Milana had felt restless ever since. She tried to settle down in the arbour with an old book. It was about a
knight who loved a princess who was promised to a foreign prince. Unable to
have the lady of his dreams, he wasted away and died. She’d read it before, and
found herself growing impatient with the foolish man. Surely people didn’t die
for love in real life?
She looked up from her book as
Binny bustled into the arbour, wiping her hands on the big blue apron she
always wore. Many a time Milana had cried into that apron when she was little
and had fallen and hurt herself, or when Urbancho had been bullying her. Even
when it had just been washed it smelt of flour and oil and the medicines that
Binny made in the stillroom.
‘Madam, there’s word that Prince
Morifer is on his way up from the port. My, what a surprise! We didn’t expect
him until the end of the week. Don’t you think you’d better come inside and get
dressed to greet him?’
Milana’s heart sank. Morifer,
here already? She suddenly realised how much she had been dreading this moment.
‘I suppose you’re right, Binny.
I must go and change.’
She’d known that Morifer was
coming especially to spend time with her, so they could make up their minds
about the proposed marriage, but oh, why so soon? She would have preferred him
to wait another month, or until Autumnfest, or next year sometime…‘At least,’
she thought as she hurried back to her chamber, ‘Daddy won’t force me into
marrying against my will. But Morifer must be keen on this match if he’s come
so early.’
Her mother was waiting
impatiently for her. She already had Milana’s best dark red velvet overgown,
trimmed with ermine, lying on the bed. Appearances were important, at first
meetings especially.
‘Hurry up, Milana’, said her
mother. ‘We only got word of Prince Morifer’s arrival a short time ago.
'Here, let
me unlace your robe.’
The lacings loosened, Milana freed
herself from the sleeves and let the robe slide to the floor. She stepped out
of the robe and pulled her shirt over her head. Her mother handed her a new
cream silk shirt that had been imported from Aristand only the week before.
Then came the heavy overgown with its draped sleeves, and an embroidered
surcoat that felt as heavy as one of the soup pots that hung over the kitchen
fire.
Milana looked at herself
critically in the bronze mirror that hung over her clothes chest. Her long fair
plaits resembled foxes’ tails. She loosed her tresses and tugged a comb through
the tangles.
Her mother shook her head in
despair. ‘Here, sit down, child! You can’t go down looking like a goatherd’s
daughter.’ She dragged the comb through Milana’s tresses again and again,
jerking
Milana’s head forward and back.
‘Mother, you’re hurting me!’
‘All right, all right, that will
have to do! Come on, we’d better go down. He’ll be here any minute!’
Pushing stray strands of hair
back as best she could with one hand, Milana gathered her skirts in the other
and headed for the door. A page approached as they closed the door.
‘His majesty has asked that you
come down as soon as possible, Madam. The Falrouvian delegation is on its way
up the hill.’
‘Oh, by the Lady’s tears,
Milana, make haste! It will look terrible if we’re not on the steps when Prince
Morifer arrives!’ Her mother seized her hand and dragged her toward the
staircase.
They hurried downstairs and
through the Great Hall to the steps of the keep. Milana’s jewelled belt came
undone as they reached the front door. She loosed herself from her mother’s
grasp and tied the belt in place as the page on door duty let in the sunlight.
Breathless, mother and daughter
joined their menfolk just as Prince Morifer and his retinue rode in. He was
attended by several pages, a scribe or two, a brace of priests and a number of
gentlemen-at-arms. It took Milana a few moments to work out why there were so
many, and then she realised that they had come in the expectation of
negotiating a marriage agreement, with arrangements for a dowry, trade
partnerships and such.
‘Daddy, I thought we were only
going to talk about it this time,’
she whispered. She was already starting to feel trapped.
‘So did I,’ replied her father,
‘but it looks as though Morifer’s already made up his mind!’
Prince Morifer was obviously
into his thirties, but he was tall and well built, with regular features.
Milana regarded him cautiously. His face was handsome enough, but his lanky
fair hair and pale skin gave him a somewhat insipid air, and Milana was not
especially impressed. With perfect manners, he greeted them one by one, and
called forward several servants bearing gifts for each member of the family.
Proudly, he presented Milana with a hound.
‘She comes from Falrouvia’s
finest bloodlines,’ he boasted. ‘She’ll outrun a hare on level ground.’
Milana eyed the creature warily.
It was a great brute of a bitch, standing as high as her hip. Milana beckoned a
servant to come and take the leash from the prince’s hand. She smiled and
thanked him, but inwardly she groaned. She detested hunting and only rarely went
out with the parties her father occasionally organised. Even when she went, she
took a book with her.
‘I don’t suppose I can expect
Morifer to know my tastes and interests,’ she consoled herself, as she led the
guests into the castle. ‘Maybe as we get to know each other, we’ll find some
common ground.’ But in her heart, she knew she was clutching at a vain hope.
Already, she knew Morifer was not the kind of man she wanted.
* * *
Within a day of
Morifer’s arrival, Milana was finding the visit a strain. She tried to put on a
cheerful face when they went for a walk in the garden. Her ladies walked
several paces behind, talking among themselves. Milana wished she could walk
with them, but her task was to entertain Morifer and get to know him better.
‘Do you read much?’ Milana asked
the prince.
‘Read?’ Morifer looked puzzled.
‘I make a point of reading any state papers my father chooses to show me, of
course.’ His face brightened. ‘And I read a fascinating treatise on the
training of peregrines recently. I expect you fly a merlin, though, don’t you?
They are usually the ladies’ favourite.’
‘No, I don’t own a hawk at all,’
Milana admitted.
‘Oh!’ Morifer sounded
astonished, even alarmed. ‘When you come to Falrouvia, I shall find a suitable
bird for you. I go hawking most days, weather permitting. My father has a fine
gyr falcon, which he permits me to fly sometimes, seeing as I am the only son
and will one day be king.’
Milana vaguely remembered
hearing somewhere that only kings were permitted to fly certain birds, and the
gyr falcon — whatever that was — must be one of them. She smiled at Morifer and
made an appreciative comment, and was embarrassed to see his eyes light up as
he smiled back. Inwardly, she grimaced. How was she going to talk to him for
the rest of her life? And yet he appeared to be besotted by her. She wondered
why. They had so little in common…
Milana’s last walk with Morifer
was tense. She tried to keep up a flow of small talk, but she felt embarrassed
by the way he kept looking at her with greedy eyes.
‘I am so looking forward to
having you in Falrouvia,’ he said. ‘We shall go hunting and hawking every day
and dance every night. And I shall be the envy of every prince in the world
with such a beautiful and charming wife.’
‘I shall enjoy the dancing, but
you know that I’m not an enthusiast of hunting and hawking, my lord.’
Her suitor brushed her warning
aside. ‘I shall teach you to enjoy them. Once you have a merlin and some hounds
of your own you will be as keen as I am, I’m sure.’
What could she say? It was
almost, she thought, as if the prince were looking at her and seeing someone
else: someone who met his fantasy of an ideal wife. She sighed inwardly but
smiled as she offered him her hand. ‘I shall try to learn more about these
things over the coming months, sir.’
As he bade her farewell, Milana
struggled to convince herself that she had quashed her misgivings. The
betrothal was, after all, what everyone else obviously wanted.
* * *
The next day,
after a sleepless night, Milana went to see her father. He was ensconced in his
study, as usual, looking over state papers.
‘Aha, my dear. I’m just looking
over the proposal from Falrouvia. The terms seem favourable enough, but of
course the proposed match depends on your final agreement. Morifer seems a decent
enough fellow, don’t you think?’
Milana bit her lower lip. Her
heart was pounding. Her father was a reasonable man, but he would not like what
she had to say. ‘Well, I have no reason to say that he’s not, Father, but we
have nothing in common. And there’s something just a bit… well, odd about him.’
‘Odd? In what way? He seems
normal enough to me.’
‘It’s nothing I can explain… oh,
I know it sounds silly, but there’s just a hint of something going on in the
background, as if he was playing a role rather than being himself. And I have a
feeling that himself is not very
nice.’
‘Milana, I cannot base a refusal
on something as nebulous as that. In fact, I’ve already told Morifer that I am
happy for the match to go ahead if you are willing.’
‘But I’m not willing, Father. I don’t feel ready to marry anyone, and I
really can’t imagine myself being happy with Morifer.
He set the papers aside. ‘I
don’t want to force you, Milana, but there’s a lot hanging on this betrothal.
Look, why don’t I tell Morifer that you’d like to wait for a year before
formalising the betrothal? That should give you time to get used to the idea.’
Milana hesitated. She didn’t actually
dislike Morifer, and she didn’t want to upset her father. ‘That’s a good idea. Tell
him I want to go on a pilgrimage or something.’
Her father smiled. ‘I haven’t
noticed any kind of religious streak in you before, daughter, but perhaps
Morifer will be happy enough with a promise of a betrothal in a year’s time. I’ll
suggest it to him.’
A year’s reprieve! Anything
could happen in a year. ‘Yes, Father. Tell him you will consider the matter
again in year’s time. When I’m back from my pilgrimage.’
Her father smiled.’ Very well,
child, I will do that. You may go.’
Milana gave her father a sketchy
curtsey and almost skipped out the door and down the spiral staircase. That had
been much easier than she’d expected. A whole year! Probably Morifer would have
found another, more suitable wife by then…
***
Many thanks to Cassandra for being such a lovely Milana!
Many thanks to Cassandra for being such a lovely Milana!
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