About Me
- Satima Flavell
- I am a writer, editor and reviewer based in Perth, Western Australia. I specialise in historical and high or epic fantasy. If you have a manuscript in preparation, don't waste money on editing too early. Instead, let me help with a mini-assessment of your work, based on careful reading of your synopsis and first 50 pages. Then, when you've worked on the manuscript in line with our discussions, I will be happy to do a full edit before you send it off into the big wide world. My fees are very reasonable - for more about my editing work, CLICK HERE
For Writers and Editors
- A dilemma about characters
- Adelaide Writers Week, 2009
- Adjectives, commas and confusion
- An artist's conflict
- An editor's role
- Authorial voice, passive writing and the passive voice
- Common misuses: common expressions
- Common misuses: confusing words
- Common misuses: pronouns - subject and object
- Conversations with a character
- Critiquing Groups
- Does length matter?
- Dont sweat the small stuff: formatting
- Free help for writers
- How much magic is too much?
- Know your characters via astrology
- Like to be an editor?
- Modern Writing Techniques
- My best reads of 2007
- My best reads of 2008
- My favourite dead authors
- My favourite modern authors
- My influential authors
- Planning and Flimmering
- Planning vs Flimmering again
- Psychological Spec-Fic
- Readers' pet hates
- Reality check: so you want to be a writer?
- Sensory detail is important!
- Speculative Fiction - what is it?
- Spelling reform?
- Substantive or linking verbs
- The creative cycle
- The promiscuous artist
- The revenge of omni rampant
- The value of "how-to" lists for writers
- Write a decent synopsis
- Write a review worth reading
- Writers block 1
- Writers block 2
- Writers block 3
- Writers need editors!
- Writers, Depression and Addiction
Interviews with authors
My Blog List
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On this day: 1 March - 1461 Chancellor George Nevill, Bishop of Exeter, addresses a crowd of some three of four thousand in St George’s Field in London, setting out the legitimac...1 hour ago
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Workshop Wednesday - Thanks to all of your contributions, Workshop Wednesday has been a success. We're going to continue on with it for as long as we have entries and the energ...1 hour ago
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Turkish OMW Cover - That’s a pretty cool cover. It’s for the Turkish edition of Old Man’s War, which is titled Yaşlı Adamın Savaşı, which is pretty much a direct translation o...1 hour ago
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The Author’s Arsenal - Therese here. Today’s guest is returning author and WU friend Kristina McMorris. Kristina’s second novel, a dramatic WWII tale called Bridge of Scarlet Lea...2 hours ago
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Cleaning, Stress Test, Coffee Jam? - Tuesday morning, the sofa was dry enough to sit on but my chair wasn’t: Matt made me sit on it anyway so he could see if it was positioned right. I got a...2 hours ago
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New Singapore Steampunk Anthology! - We’ve been covering various steampunk anthologies from around the world, and the most recent one comes from Singapore: The Steampowered Globe: Asian Scienc...3 hours ago
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Now this is one for the record… biodiversity! - You may have thought The National Archives was all about preserving documents and, while you’re absolutely correct, we also want to preserve the wildlife a...3 hours ago
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Mythic Resonance Is Here - I'm pleased to announce that the Specusphere anthology, Mythic Resonance, in which I have a story,"Brothers"(Snow White and the seven Tolkienesque Dwarves)...3 hours ago
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First Sunday in Lent, Burgbrennen, Luxembourg; Leap Year Day - *First Sunday in Lent, **Burgbrennen*, * Luxembourg* *A note about the dating of items in Wilson's Almanac** * *On the first Sunday in Lent (Invocabit), fir...5 hours ago
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Hiatus - I'm too busy to blog this week or next - half way through an exhausting run of very different one-off talks, which have required colossal preparation and ene...6 hours ago
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Rereads: Rudyard Kipling’s KIM - by Jennifer Stevenson The first time my mother read Kipling’s KIM aloud to me and my brother, we were both under two years old. We understood maybe one wo...8 hours ago
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This just in from the front line... - * EMERGENCY TELEGRAM STOP* Cake wars escalation STOP Skirmishes reported on the northern front STOP Herewith evidence from the Mothership STOP Heavy...9 hours ago
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Two questions that loom over the trade publishing business - A lot of people in publishing would pay a lot of money to get a reliable answer to these two questions: When will the growth in Amazon’s share of the consu...9 hours ago
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The Alcuin number of a graph - A man had to transport to the far side of a river a wolf, a goat, and a bundle of cabbages. The only boat he could find was one which would carry only two o...13 hours ago
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Guest blog-- editor becomes writer - *From Alicia: Nancy Reinhardt has had a varied and intriguing career in writing and editing! I knew her many years ago in my RWA chapter, and she suggeste...16 hours ago
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Read an Excerpt from EXOGENE - In GERMLINE journalist Oscar Wendell introduced us to a new breed of special forces and the surprising humanity these elite and deadly soldiers are capab...16 hours ago
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Blog Wise Tip 5: Manage Distractions - Given their productivity levels, you might think that A-list bloggers don’t get distracted. The truth, as the interviews in Blog Wise show, is that they’ve...17 hours ago
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Must a Novelist Promote on Those Pesky Social Media? - Tami posted this question on my “Ask A Question For My Blog” page: I’m not on Facebook, I don’t tweet, and other than email, I don’t follow any of the othe...19 hours ago
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Self-Publishing Round-Up #1 - I’m trying to keep up with what’s going on in indie publishing, and I realized there are a lot of folks, both readers and writers, who would be interested ...19 hours ago
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Sympathetic Characters - Years ago following a rejection, an author wrote to me and asked what it meant if an editor said she didn’t find her main character entirely sympathetic. W...20 hours ago
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Pam Houston - Pam Houston divides her time between her ranch in Colorado and the University of California at Davis, where she is director of the Creative Writing P...22 hours ago
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TTYU Retro: What does choice of point of view (POV) mean? How does it challenge a writer? - I can't tell you how many lengthy discussions I've witnessed, and participated in, on the topic of point of view. With every visit to Absolute Write (a ter...1 day ago
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Guest Author Allison Rushby: I Don't Know How She Does It (well, actually, I do…) - Today, I'd like to welcome Allison Rushby to the blog to help us figure out how to do it all. Okay, maybe her advice is aimed more at juggling writing and...1 day ago
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Popping back in to say hello - It’s been a while since I blogged. This seems to be a phrase that I say all too often and I apologise that. Once back from the writing retreat, I’ve been u...1 day ago
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Cafe Poet Update - I'm shamefully overdue for an update on my experiences as a Cafe Poet. It's not for lack of things to write about, either. First, there's been the chance t...1 day ago
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Hyde Park in Summer: the Illusion of Photos - Hyde Park, Perth. Feburary 23 2012. It's the height of summer, but as a result of a lot of rain in December, there is is still water in the ponds, so...1 day ago
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The Darkest Shade Of Grey, episode 2 now live - My serial novella, The Darkest Shade Of Grey, is being published in four weekly installments by The Red Penny Papers. It’s free to read online, so get on o...1 day ago
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The Growing Seed, Fallow Ground, Sheep, Milk - We were reading Proverbs 27 this morning and the following section really spoke to me. * *Be thou diligent to know the state of thy flocks, *and* look we...1 day ago
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Writing contest for high school and community college students - Teachers and folks who know high school and community college students, this is a non-fictin (biography) contest that you might want to check out. Here's the...1 day ago
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3000 Thank Yous & GIVEAWAY - So, last week *something pretty cool happened*...we managed to attract our * 3000th Esteemed Stalker*. Look to the right. Now back at me. Now eat some bacon...2 days ago
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THE 1973 COMIC ART CONVENTION: Bob Kane, C.C. Beck, Sol Harrison, Russ Heath et al... - A few weeks ago I reprinted the 1970 Comic Art Convention Luncheon, which featured Bill Everett and Joe Kubert interviewed by Gil Kane and Neal Adams. It go...2 days ago
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Wyadup Rocks (70) - This scene was taken from a photo in a travel brochure of south western WA. Wyadup Rocks is a stunning part of the coastline near Dunsborough. The rock fo...3 days ago
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#221 - To _______________: Dear QueryShark: Vuto loses her third child mere days after birth - and she's only 17 years old. Unless Vuto left her child on the t...3 days ago
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Who Elects the Prime Minister of Australia? - I try not to discuss party politics on this blog so I'm not going to talk about who's wrong or right in the current upheaval going on in Canberra. What I a...3 days ago
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The Skill List Project: Word Choice and Wordspace - This is another post in The Skill List Project: an attempt to list all the skills involved in writing and selling fiction, particularly science fiction and...4 days ago
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Interview with Linda Hays-Gibbs - Today I welcome Linda Hays-Gibbs to Spinning Pearls. Linda is the author of a paranormal regency romance called My Angel, My Light as Darkness Falls. Here'...4 days ago
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Why Poets Should Not Seek Literary Agents - *Posted by Victoria Strauss for Writer Beware* Writer Beware hears from a fair number poets. Much of the time, they're contacting us to ask about self-pub...4 days ago
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Are You a Purple Cow? - What do purple cows have to do with writing? Everything. Discover how to stand out in the writing world.4 days ago
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Some Ancestors Of Edward II - I've been doing some research into a few of Edward II's ancestors lately. I didn't know that he had some Polish blood: one of his great-great-great-great-...4 days ago
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New Years cards - This is the design I did for my New Years cards. I made about 12 of them, and once again I challenged myself to used papers and colours that I would not u...5 days ago
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Could Mary Tudor have salvaged the reputation of her reign? Part II: A Broken Princess - As a follow up to my previous article on Mary Tudor salvaging the reputation of her reign, I began to think about the contributing factors leading to her s...5 days ago
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Bran the Betrayer Part 2 ( a short story by K.J. Taylor ) - Looking for some weekend reading? Here’s part 2 of the new short story by K.J. Taylor, set in the world of her Fallen Moon Trilogy. Thanks again K.J ! Bran...5 days ago
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‘Elf Love’ revisited… - I’ve just read a blog post by Rose Mambert, visionary (and elf-loving) Editor-in-Chief at Pink Narcissus Press, which stopped me in my tracks. Two amorous ...5 days ago
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Among Us Women At The Self-Publishing Review - It’s Joan Lerner’s turn to brace herself today: my review of her book Among Us Women is now up at the Self-Publishing Review. I hope she’s had a cup of cof...6 days ago
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A Big Tower and A Church - The Imperial Baths in Trier (Part 2) - After the Roman administration left Trier in the early 5th century, the Roman buildings fell into decline and were used as quarries, like in so many other...6 days ago
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A Snapshot - A lemongrass blade spears through the sunlight down stabs into shadow at the base of its fellows taking bright green into the heart of the darkness of the so...1 week ago
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Does it matter if my Hierophant’s a plonker? - More questions I’m afraid… It is funny how coincidences work. The night after a conversation with a few colleagues at work concerning matters recondite, I ...1 week ago
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Who is Jonathan Carroll and why should you care? - I'm writing. The pages are starting to stack up. My morale is improving the more I feel like a writer. (See all earlier comments to this effect in the prev...1 week ago
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My Writing Week: Issue 8, Year 5 - Hi all, I did not do much writinglast week because my computer continued to act up. It taunted me by sometimesworking, sometimes not. When I was not fiddl...1 week ago
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Nebula Nomination for Aliette De Bodard… - Congratulations to our client Aliette de Bodard, whose story Shipbirth has been short-listed for this the 2011 Nebula Award in the Short Story category. Th...1 week ago
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Do Legacy Publishers Treat Authors Badly? - Some people have disagreed with my statement that legacy publishers treat authors like shit. So I've made this list. Decide for yourself if these actions c...1 week ago
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One star reviews.... - My absolute favourite one-star review was for Stormlord's Exile (the last book in a trilogy) at the Barnes and Noble page. Here it is, in its entirety: --...1 week ago
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New Link Added - Link to the blog of Barbara Gaskell Denvil, who is an excellent writer of fiction for this period.1 week ago
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How to GIVE a Critique - by Annette Lyon Some time ago, I did a two-part series on how to take and use a critique. Find part I here and part II here. I got a lot of great feedback...1 week ago
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February 2012 Readings@Seksan - Date: Saturday 25th February, 2012 3.30-6pm Place: Seksan Gallery, 67, Jalan Tempinis Satu, LuckyGarden, Bangsar (Map www.seksan.com) Lineup : Jason Erik...1 week ago
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The FINAL Call (An Update On Our Book Promotion Program) - It is half-term in the BubbleCow household this week and this is a stressful time for all involved! As I type this in our home office I can’t help thinking...2 weeks ago
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My Story Published on Queensland Health Website - Queensland Health invited me to be part of a cutting edge mental health media campaign! Last October, during Mental Health week, Queensland Health launched...2 weeks ago
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Australian Romance writing - what's there to take seriously? - Last weekend saw the annual Australian Romance Readers Awards. Once again, Australian author Anna Campbell won Favourite Australian Romance Author as well a...2 weeks ago
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A Few Comments On My Use Of The Akashic Records - Recently I caught a debate on a Facebook forum about the use of ‘alternative’ historical research and whether it should be used as a resource, or dismisse...2 weeks ago
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Your book will probably never be made into a movie - Most authors harbour secret or not-so-secret dreams of their book or manuscript being made into a movie. Usually it's novelists who dream this more frequen...3 weeks ago
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And life goes on ... - Well, Present Laughter has now opened. Fingers crossed for a good run ... *g* I celebrated the fact by coming down with a gastrobug, but that's all sorted...3 weeks ago
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The Mirage is here! - Today is publication day for The Mirage, Matt Ruff’s new novel, which is available as a gorgeous hardcover and as an ebook. You can read a PDF excerpt on T...3 weeks ago
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Margo Reveals What it’s like inside a ROR Crit Week! - From Margo … A Deepening ROR—a wRiters On the Rise workshop, from the inside First there’s a bit of foreplay. Someone pipes up online: “When’s the next ROR...3 weeks ago
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Why I’d rather blog than submit my articles to magazines - There are at least two types of blog posts. One addresses a current issue, and the issue and the post are likely to be here today and gone tomorrow. This i...3 weeks ago
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A sad event that only harms the cause - I don't like to say it, but I am glad that I missed the ceremonies at the Tent Embassy today. That way I managed to avoid the dramas at the nearby restaura...4 weeks ago
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Back from NZ, not back here - Retreat is over and regular blogging has resumed over at the new website - http://wp.nicolermurphy.com/ Hope to see you over there!5 weeks ago
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On SOPA, piracy, copyright, etc. - I've been wasting too much time arguing about these issues today, so I thought that rather than blacking out my dreamwidth and livejournal (i.e. making it ...5 weeks ago
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This is Your Brain on Story - *This is the first article in a series on story and the brain. * There is nothing more powerful than story. Those who tell stories literally create the wor...1 month ago
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Macbeth is a Pussy - Sup guys today I am going to tell you a story about a guy who sucks so bad you aren't even allowed to say his name in theaters anymore his name is MACBETH ...1 month ago
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Russian Acro Gymnastics – Saturday Morning YouTube Crawl - Well many of you that know me well know I like to sit down on a Saturday morning and crawl through YouTube (When I have time that is!). The following video...1 month ago
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Monkey Mind Has Moved to Patheos - Thank you for visiting. After being hosted happily for some years here at Blogger I've accepted an offer to join the team at Patheos. You can link to my Mo...1 month ago
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Ryddles for the Holidayes - As ye knowe, my grete freende the writere Virginia Wulfstan doth love tradiciounal literature, and she hath devoted herself to gatheringe bits of oold lite...2 months ago
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Merry Christmas! - I hope everyone has a safe holiday season and a prosperous and productive 2012. As a special pressie from me, Hal Junior: The Secret Signal (Kindle ebook) ...2 months ago
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Katherine, Queen of England, come into the court! - *During our recent reading of King Henry VIII, our president, Frances Dharmalingham, read the part of Queen Katherine with great sensitivity. She reports h...2 months ago
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Book Review: The Morals of May Fair by Annie Edwards - Review of The Morals of May Fair, an 1858 novel by Annie Edwards.2 months ago
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You know you're in Ghana when...(next instalment) - 1. You pass a taxi rank at a busy intersection (37th) and see a man standing holding a lead attached to a collar on a large fluffy white goat. 2. You are...3 months ago
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Adventures in Depression - Some people have a legitimate reason to feel depressed, but not me. I just woke up one day feeling sad and helpless for absolutely no reason. It's di...4 months ago
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Self-Editing versus Pro Editing: What You Can (and Can’t) Do Yourself - Self-Editing versus Pro Editing: What You Can (and Can’t) Do Yourself by John Robert Marlow It’s no secret that the publishing and film industries are gett...4 months ago
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World Mental Illness Day - This week is World Mental Illness Day or Mental Health Day or some such (I think it varies from place to place, like the various state Cancer Foundations, ...4 months ago
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William and Mary Barrett Dyer, 400 years later - I've opened a new website specifically for *William and Mary Barrett Dyer*(<--- click that text to go there), which carries articles about the Dyers and th...5 months ago
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I've got a new book out! - I've got a new book that's come out on the Fiction Studio Books imprint, named *The God's Wife. *It's being sold as an e-book on all platforms from Kindle ...5 months ago
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WD's August Premium Kit is the ''The Rules of Self-Publishing'' Collection. Tons of Stuff Packaged at a Deep Discount - The WD Premium Collection Bundle Kits are new this year and they're very simple in nature. We bundle a ton of stuff relating to a topic—in this case, *"The...6 months ago
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The Value of Experimentation - I've recently come to know and appreciate Brad King's work, both as an innovative media professional, as well as a university professor. So I've been ke...7 months ago
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New life and swift death - Mists before dawn promised a clear day, a window in the relentless procession of grey, wet and windy days that seem to have characterised this early 'sum...8 months ago
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The Writer's Toolbox - The whys and wherefores - Just as no artist would consider working without a toolbox - including physical items like paints and brushes, but also non-physical things like techniques...9 months ago
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Book Launch Swancon Sunday 24th April - Ticonderoga Publications are launching their two anthologies, More Scary Kisses and Dead Red Heart: Australian Vampire Tales at Swancon 36 at Hyatt Hotel, ...10 months ago
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Sick II - Hail, And this will be brain to screen, no editing, because yesterday I wrote this and then the machine ate it. Pictures to follow. Practice-wise, three...10 months ago
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I Now Haz a Webpage - It's over here at carolryles.com. This is the place where I'll be posting news about my writing, publications etc. Most of my other writing related posts h...1 year ago
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Hiatus - As you’ve probably guessed by now – this blog has slipped into a bit of a hiatus. This is mainly because I am concentrating all my time and energy now on g...1 year ago
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Book Trailer - With every book we do, I try to tweak things that I learned in the production of the previous book. This time round, we are changing the size of the book t...1 year ago
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BLOG TOUR (15) POND MAGIC - Today I have a Guest Blogger: Angela Sunde. This is a first for me! What it means is that I don't have to dream up appropriate questions or do any of the har...1 year ago
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The Last Days of Queen Isabella (c1295-1358) - * * ** *Isabella returns to England from France* *The following account of the final days of Isabella is taken from John Timbs, **“Nooks and corners of Eng...1 year ago
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Adventuring Summer - Martial art: I've been very lucky to meet a chinese master of Yi chuan called master Cui Rui Bin (kung fu like). This man was so cool, he has teached us so...1 year ago
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Blog Archive
Monday, 30 January 2012
Studying Anatomy or How One Thing Leads to Another
One thing all writers have in common is the fact that they’re into words, bigtime. A gift for languages is not uncommon: most writers I know have at least a smattering of knowledge about languages other than their own. And words can even be the key to getting us to learn other subjects. I love it when I have to write a scene that demands research such as a sword fight or a walk in a northern hemisphere forest in spring. I not only garner facts, but new words to add to the collection. These ventures have some practical spin-offs: most writers are useful to have on your team at a quiz night and can be relied on to play a decent hand at Scrabble. And they can bandy about words that are not usually found outside specialist dictionaries.
Anatomy, for example, is longstanding fascination of mine. The parts that make up a physical being, be it a flower, a mouse, a raven or an elephant, form such wonderfully cohesive wholes that one wonders how the heck it all happened.
Physiologists, geneticists and experts on evolution can give us some answers, but they are hard put to explain their findings in terms ordinary mortals can understand. Me, I just look at the petals and stamens and wonder at the beauty of the flower and stand amazed at the cleverness of the evolution that brought it about. Any deeper interest I have in anatomy has to do with its wonderful vocabulary.
As a uni dropout back in the early sixties, when I had no money and less sense, I did whatever I could to earn a crust. This involved doing a great many things that my parents wouldn’t have approved of, some of which required me to get naked. One such money-spinner was posing nude for artists and photographers.
A regular gig was posing for the art students at East Sydney Tech, now the National Art School. The school was (and still is) housed in the old Darlinghurst Gaol, an ancient edifice with thick stone walls that kept the sun out and the cold in – nice in summer, but it made for little joy in nude modelling in winter-time! The door would be open to let in light, and they would put a two-bar electric radiator close to me. This meant that one half of my anatomy was freezing and one half burning. I remember one time when the lecturer completely forgot to give me the obligatory stretch break after 20 minutes. When she finally remembered, I had trouble standing up. The cold half had gone completely to sleep while my buttocks must have been ruddier than the cherry, although it would have taken more than a Handel aria, or even a Puccini one, to warm my tiny hands, to say nothing of my entire front and most of my left leg.
I didn’t only model for straightforward sketching classes. One nice gig – I got to keep my clothes on! – was posing for the portrait class. It was mind-blowing to look at the students’ work as it took shape, week by week. Of course, the lighting was subtly different for each one, depending on what part of the room they were in. Some added glamour to my appearance, some painted me half in shadow, but the most surprising one was of me as a boy! The features were there, but the clothes had somehow become masculine and my trade-mark pony-tail had metamorphosed into a short back and sides! OK, so maybe my girl-friends calling me The Titless Wonder was not entirely unwarranted…
But the most interesting term was the one in which I was the female model for the anatomy class. It meant taking my clothes off again, but the weather was better by then so I didn’t mind as much. I hadn’t done Biology in high school, so the entire subject matter of the course was a revelation. As a dancer, I knew how to pose, of course, and I also knew what poses would make which muscles stand out. What I hadn’t known was the names of the muscles. We spent several classes on the visible musculature of the leg, and I think I can still, even today, recite the names from hip to toe, for the lecturer was determined that his students should not just able to sketch the muscles, but know their names and functions as well: gluteus maximus. fascia lata, sartorius, plantaris, tibialis, gastrocnemius, extensor digitorum longus and a dozen more. I can’t remember exactly where they are or what they do anymore, but the names still roll trippingly off my tongue, and what lovely words they are! Latin, like its grandchild Italian, has a poetic, sonorous, musical feel to it. I could listen to either language for hours.
I got to know some very interesting people through modelling, including Thea Proctor (1879-1966), the well-known artist. She was nearing the end of her life when I modelled for her and her friends, but she was sprightly and intelligent, her mind still as sharp as her lino-cutting tools. I still have a sketch she did of me, which funnily enough did not look remotely like the ‘me’ of the time (I was dancing then, and weighed less than 50 kilos) but it looks very like the mature me with curves more voluminous than voluptuous!
Naturally, the snippets of anatomy I learnt from modelling stood me in good stead when I later became a dance teacher and later still, when I decided to update my expertise by studying at the Western Australian Academy of Performing Arts. There, our anatomy lecturer would take contorted poses that looked like something from one of those statuary groups that depict an attack on some helpless tribe by another that wasn’t so helpless, sometimes twisting one arm behind her back or overhead in a dramatic manner that made me think she should have been an actor instead of a physiologist. She was a hard taskmaster, making us name the agonist and the antagonist and other such technicalities that I never did quite figure out. But I learnt a lot more lovely words: pectoralis major, brachialis, latissimus dorsi, supraspinatus...
Isn’t it funny how one thing leads to another in life? In the last decade or two, I’ve done quite a lot of academic editing, and I am quite fearless in tackling theses and papers in the medical arena. I’ve had a crack at most of the health sciences, predominantly physiotherapy. After meeting extensor digitorum longus and his mates, fascinating facts concerning COPD or female incontinence hold no terrors. And it’s unlikely that I will be intimidated by any jargon, ever again!
Pictures courtesy Wikimedia Commons:
http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File%3A2009-08-31-akt-muehla-041.jpg
by Ralf Roletschek [GFDL 1.2 (www.gnu.org/licenses/old-licenses/fdl-1.2.html)], via Wikimedia Commons (Even though that pic is from Germany, it looks a lot like the environs of the old gaol where I worked!)
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/46/Muscle_posterior_labeled.png
by Mikael Häggström (w:Gray's muscle pictures) [Public domain], via Wikimedia Commons
Anatomy, for example, is longstanding fascination of mine. The parts that make up a physical being, be it a flower, a mouse, a raven or an elephant, form such wonderfully cohesive wholes that one wonders how the heck it all happened.
Physiologists, geneticists and experts on evolution can give us some answers, but they are hard put to explain their findings in terms ordinary mortals can understand. Me, I just look at the petals and stamens and wonder at the beauty of the flower and stand amazed at the cleverness of the evolution that brought it about. Any deeper interest I have in anatomy has to do with its wonderful vocabulary.
As a uni dropout back in the early sixties, when I had no money and less sense, I did whatever I could to earn a crust. This involved doing a great many things that my parents wouldn’t have approved of, some of which required me to get naked. One such money-spinner was posing nude for artists and photographers.
A regular gig was posing for the art students at East Sydney Tech, now the National Art School. The school was (and still is) housed in the old Darlinghurst Gaol, an ancient edifice with thick stone walls that kept the sun out and the cold in – nice in summer, but it made for little joy in nude modelling in winter-time! The door would be open to let in light, and they would put a two-bar electric radiator close to me. This meant that one half of my anatomy was freezing and one half burning. I remember one time when the lecturer completely forgot to give me the obligatory stretch break after 20 minutes. When she finally remembered, I had trouble standing up. The cold half had gone completely to sleep while my buttocks must have been ruddier than the cherry, although it would have taken more than a Handel aria, or even a Puccini one, to warm my tiny hands, to say nothing of my entire front and most of my left leg.
I didn’t only model for straightforward sketching classes. One nice gig – I got to keep my clothes on! – was posing for the portrait class. It was mind-blowing to look at the students’ work as it took shape, week by week. Of course, the lighting was subtly different for each one, depending on what part of the room they were in. Some added glamour to my appearance, some painted me half in shadow, but the most surprising one was of me as a boy! The features were there, but the clothes had somehow become masculine and my trade-mark pony-tail had metamorphosed into a short back and sides! OK, so maybe my girl-friends calling me The Titless Wonder was not entirely unwarranted…
But the most interesting term was the one in which I was the female model for the anatomy class. It meant taking my clothes off again, but the weather was better by then so I didn’t mind as much. I hadn’t done Biology in high school, so the entire subject matter of the course was a revelation. As a dancer, I knew how to pose, of course, and I also knew what poses would make which muscles stand out. What I hadn’t known was the names of the muscles. We spent several classes on the visible musculature of the leg, and I think I can still, even today, recite the names from hip to toe, for the lecturer was determined that his students should not just able to sketch the muscles, but know their names and functions as well: gluteus maximus. fascia lata, sartorius, plantaris, tibialis, gastrocnemius, extensor digitorum longus and a dozen more. I can’t remember exactly where they are or what they do anymore, but the names still roll trippingly off my tongue, and what lovely words they are! Latin, like its grandchild Italian, has a poetic, sonorous, musical feel to it. I could listen to either language for hours.
I got to know some very interesting people through modelling, including Thea Proctor (1879-1966), the well-known artist. She was nearing the end of her life when I modelled for her and her friends, but she was sprightly and intelligent, her mind still as sharp as her lino-cutting tools. I still have a sketch she did of me, which funnily enough did not look remotely like the ‘me’ of the time (I was dancing then, and weighed less than 50 kilos) but it looks very like the mature me with curves more voluminous than voluptuous!
Naturally, the snippets of anatomy I learnt from modelling stood me in good stead when I later became a dance teacher and later still, when I decided to update my expertise by studying at the Western Australian Academy of Performing Arts. There, our anatomy lecturer would take contorted poses that looked like something from one of those statuary groups that depict an attack on some helpless tribe by another that wasn’t so helpless, sometimes twisting one arm behind her back or overhead in a dramatic manner that made me think she should have been an actor instead of a physiologist. She was a hard taskmaster, making us name the agonist and the antagonist and other such technicalities that I never did quite figure out. But I learnt a lot more lovely words: pectoralis major, brachialis, latissimus dorsi, supraspinatus...
Isn’t it funny how one thing leads to another in life? In the last decade or two, I’ve done quite a lot of academic editing, and I am quite fearless in tackling theses and papers in the medical arena. I’ve had a crack at most of the health sciences, predominantly physiotherapy. After meeting extensor digitorum longus and his mates, fascinating facts concerning COPD or female incontinence hold no terrors. And it’s unlikely that I will be intimidated by any jargon, ever again!
Pictures courtesy Wikimedia Commons:
http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File%3A2009-08-31-akt-muehla-041.jpg
by Ralf Roletschek [GFDL 1.2 (www.gnu.org/licenses/old-licenses/fdl-1.2.html)], via Wikimedia Commons (Even though that pic is from Germany, it looks a lot like the environs of the old gaol where I worked!)
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/46/Muscle_posterior_labeled.png
by Mikael Häggström (w:Gray's muscle pictures) [Public domain], via Wikimedia Commons
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3 comments:
You have had a varied career haven't you? I know what you mean about language, I have always been fascinated by it, not that I am into anatomy like you are. But I do have more than a smattering of several languages which one day I hope to improve upon.
What a fascinating tale, Satima!
Yes, certainly a varied career - all grist for the writing mill! I guess everyone has a lifetime of stories to tell, and I know I get ideas not only from my own experience, but that of my friends as well!